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Array ( [sid] => 79546 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => shattered beyond repair [time] => 2005-01-12 05:26:05 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I'm a shattered piece, a fragment
from your life
You discarded me and all you gave
me was strife
You used me, abused me and I lived
with your lies
Now I'm just a fragment piece with no
bonding ties
I'm unfixable, I'm far beyond repair
All you gave me was heartache and
despair
The fragmented pieces lay broken in bits
After been shattered by a dozen hits
Scattered memories of these fragile
pieces remain
Sharp cutting edges bare my blood
stains
I'm a discarded fragment from your life
that lays dead
I hope and pray someone screws with
your head
Til the time comes this shattered fragment
remains
Scattered, unfixable and bearing the shame. [comments] => 6 [counter] => 173 [topic] => 48 [informant] => mina-1 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

shattered beyond repair

Contributed by mina-1 on Wednesday, 12th January 2005 @ 05:26:05 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

I'm a shattered piece, a fragment
from your life
You discarded me and all you gave
me was strife
You used me, abused me and I lived
with your lies
Now I'm just a fragment piece with no
bonding ties
I'm unfixable, I'm far beyond repair
All you gave me was heartache and
despair
The fragmented pieces lay broken in bits
After been shattered by a dozen hits
Scattered memories of these fragile
pieces remain
Sharp cutting edges bare my blood
stains
I'm a discarded fragment from your life
that lays dead
I hope and pray someone screws with
your head
Til the time comes this shattered fragment
remains
Scattered, unfixable and bearing the shame.

Copyright © mina-1 ... [ 2005-01-12 05:26:05]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: shattered beyond repair (User Rating: 1 )
by pUnKa_RaCh on Wednesday, 12th January 2005 @ 05:52:29 AM AEST
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this was an awesome poem....uve portrayed ur feelings very well and i love ur word use. well done, its very sad. hope u r ok

Re: shattered beyond repair (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Wednesday, 12th January 2005 @ 06:18:02 AM AEST
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very sad and deep, expressed well *hugs* pm me if you need a friend ok hun?
pixie xx

Re: shattered beyond repair (User Rating: 1 )
by jmpy84 on Wednesday, 12th January 2005 @ 03:00:42 PM AEST
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awsome very emotional

Re: shattered beyond repair (User Rating: 1 )
by DorianChambers on Wednesday, 12th January 2005 @ 04:07:18 PM AEST
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a verry heartfelt poem, sorry 4 your pain . . .

Dorian Chambers

Re: shattered beyond repair (User Rating: 1 )
by lostlady38 on Wednesday, 12th January 2005 @ 08:10:43 PM AEST
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whoa! very deep ...excellent wording here. anyone who can't feel your pain after reading this is numb from the inside out. amazing piece of work. love this one. impressive

Re: shattered beyond repair (User Rating: 1 )
by Whitelightning77 on Wednesday, 12th January 2005 @ 10:12:23 PM AEST
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heartfelt write with sadness and pain conveyed. thanks again for sharing and keep writing!

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