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Array ( [sid] => 79561 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => After You Hung Up The Phone [time] => 2005-01-12 08:42:00 [hometext] => I felt my heart sink... [bodytext] => After you hung up the phone,
I felt so down & very alone,
Heart felt like it’d been kicked,
Yet again my depression had me tricked.

As soon as you leave I want you near,
As alone I become awash with fear,
It seems to come from nowhere,
In my soul it left a deep tear.

I feel the need to cling on tight,
Need you to ease some of my fright,
I can’t explain how I feel,
As you might not think my problems real.

Tears do fall freely as I write this,
Feels like forever until I feel your kiss,
I am sorry for being this way,
I can’t seem to stop my fears coming out to play.

Please love me & my heart until we die,
Promise you’ll never say goodbye,
I am nothing if I don’t have you,
Without you in my life what would I do?

If I has one single wish,
If a fairy could sort it in just one swish,
I would have her take away all my fears & pain,
I’d ask her to make me enjoy life once again.
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After You Hung Up The Phone

Contributed by pixie on Wednesday, 12th January 2005 @ 08:42:00 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

After you hung up the phone,
I felt so down & very alone,
Heart felt like it’d been kicked,
Yet again my depression had me tricked.

As soon as you leave I want you near,
As alone I become awash with fear,
It seems to come from nowhere,
In my soul it left a deep tear.

I feel the need to cling on tight,
Need you to ease some of my fright,
I can’t explain how I feel,
As you might not think my problems real.

Tears do fall freely as I write this,
Feels like forever until I feel your kiss,
I am sorry for being this way,
I can’t seem to stop my fears coming out to play.

Please love me & my heart until we die,
Promise you’ll never say goodbye,
I am nothing if I don’t have you,
Without you in my life what would I do?

If I has one single wish,
If a fairy could sort it in just one swish,
I would have her take away all my fears & pain,
I’d ask her to make me enjoy life once again.

Copyright Â© pixie ... [ 2005-01-12 08:42:00]
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Re: After You Hung Up The Phone (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 12th January 2005 @ 08:49:22 AM AEST
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Best line? "I can’t seem to stop my fears coming out to play." Sweetly sentimental. Hugs and blessings.

Re: After You Hung Up The Phone (User Rating: 1 )
by Stitch on Wednesday, 12th January 2005 @ 09:05:26 AM AEST
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I've felt this wrenching and tearing apart. I'm not sure it's healthy, but it certainly is painful. You have described it well.
Stitch

Re: After You Hung Up The Phone (User Rating: 1 )
by Gigi_15 on Wednesday, 12th January 2005 @ 09:37:33 AM AEST
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hey hon..
I hope you feel better..this is a great poem seriously great rhyme..keep it up..I hope next time you could write about a happy poem too! Great work!

Re: After You Hung Up The Phone (User Rating: 1 )
by autumngreeneyes on Wednesday, 12th January 2005 @ 09:51:01 AM AEST
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If I has one single wish,
If a fairy could sort it in just one swish,

I kind of see Peter Pan..with a sword..taking care of everything.. it's awful when your whole being feels like it depends on someone else.. if that's how it is..you need to get your own independance..that's tough..

Re: After You Hung Up The Phone (User Rating: 1 )
by craz2 on Wednesday, 12th January 2005 @ 09:54:39 AM AEST
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I know how this feels. Hang in there pixie. Write me if you need to. I am sure you have plenty of support. But I will talk by email if it helps.

Re: After You Hung Up The Phone (User Rating: 1 )
by O7NeVeS on Wednesday, 12th January 2005 @ 10:22:30 AM AEST
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I agree with everyone. Definitely an awesome write! TD

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