Your Poetry Dot Com

Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com - Read, Rate, Comment on, or Submit Poetry. Browse Poetry Forums, or just enjoy other parts of our poetic community.
One of the largest databases of poetry on the net, now over 198,500+ poems!

Poems On Site: 198,500+ Comments On Poems: 427,000+ Forum Posts: 105,000+

Custom Search


Welcome !	Home · FAQ · Topics · Web Links · Your Account · Submit Poetry · Top 30 · OldSite Link	09-June 17:23:20 AEST

Menu

· Our eBay Store

· Error Submit

Poetry

· Submit Poetry

· Least Read Poems

· Members Listing

· Old Site Post 2001

· Old Site Pre 2001

· Poetry Archive

· Public Domain Poetry

Stories

· Stories (NEW ! )

· Submit Story

· Story Topics

· Stories Archive

· Story Search

Community

· Our Poetry Forums

· Our Arcade
100's of Games !

Site Help

· FAQ

· Feedback

Members Areas

· Your Account

· Members Journals

· Premium Sign-Up

Premium Section

· Special Section

· Premium Poems

· Premium Submit

· Premium Search

· Premium Archive

· Premium Topics

Fun & Games

· Jokes

· Bubble Puzzle

· Cross Word Easy

· Word Hunt

Reference

· Dictionary (Rhyming)

· Site Updates

· Special Content

Search

Top

Help This Site

· Donations

Others

· Moderators

Our Other Sites

· Embroidery Design Store
· Your Jokes
· Special Urls
· JM Embroideries
· Public Domain Poetry and Stories
· Diamond Dotz
· Cooking Info and Recipes
· Quoof - Australian Story

Social

Array ( [sid] => 79639 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Starving Perfection [time] => 2005-01-12 19:07:41 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Push the food away
Can’t you see
It will mess up
What I’m trying to be
This perfect girl
Slender and thin
Then I’ll be noticed
No one cares what’s within
I only long to be skinny
And for once feel pride
Starving for perfection
This I don’t mind
I’ll be your perfect girl
With a slender physique
I’ll hold my pain in
Of it I won’t speak
The torment that I go through
To reach perfection
I wish I could eat
Yet I long to be thin
So I give up eating
From here on in
Then I’ll be your perfect girl
Pretty and thin [comments] => 2 [counter] => 330 [topic] => 61 [informant] => EternalNight4x [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => selfstruggles )

Starving Perfection

Contributed by EternalNight4x on Wednesday, 12th January 2005 @ 07:07:41 PM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles

Push the food away
Can’t you see
It will mess up
What I’m trying to be
This perfect girl
Slender and thin
Then I’ll be noticed
No one cares what’s within
I only long to be skinny
And for once feel pride
Starving for perfection
This I don’t mind
I’ll be your perfect girl
With a slender physique
I’ll hold my pain in
Of it I won’t speak
The torment that I go through
To reach perfection
I wish I could eat
Yet I long to be thin
So I give up eating
From here on in
Then I’ll be your perfect girl
Pretty and thin

Copyright Â© EternalNight4x ... [ 2005-01-12 19:07:41]
(Date/Time posted on site)

Advertisments:

Previous Posted Poem | | Next Posted Poem

Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more

All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title etc.

Re: Starving Perfection (User Rating: 1 )
by afterdark on Wednesday, 12th January 2005 @ 08:58:09 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

I read this cause I had a feeling of what it was about..I had an ex girlfriend who had the same prolem. However it did not turn out well for her and it will not for you if you are going through this..

Re: Starving Perfection (User Rating: 1 )
by autumngreeneyes on Thursday, 13th January 2005 @ 12:09:40 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

movies, t.v. magazines and all the hype paint a portrait of the perfect woman.."thin is in"..it's an illusion that's impossible..most guys like to feel a little meat when they have a woman in their arms.. don't starve yourself..

While every care is taken to ensure the general sites content is family safe, our moderators cannot be in all places; all the time. Please report poetry and or comments that are in breach of our site rules HERE (Please include poem title or url). Parents also please ensure that you supervise your children well when they are on the internet; regardless of what a site says about being, or being considered, child-safe.

Poetry is much like a great photo, a single "moment in time" capturing many feelings and emotions. Yet, they are very alive; creating stirrings within the readers who form visual "pictures" of the expressed emotions within the Poem. Â©

Opinions expressed in the poetry, comments, forums etc. on this site are not necessarily those of this site, its owners and/or operators; but of the individuals who post items to this site.
Frequently Asked Questions | | | Privacy Policy | | | Contact Webmaster

All submitted items are Copyright Â© to their submitter. All the rest Copyright Â© 2002-2050 by Your Poetry Dot Com

All logos and trademarks in this site are property of their respective owners.

Script Generation Time: 0.052 Seconds. - View our Site Map | .© your-poetry.com