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Without you forever and a day
Contributed by
blueeyedevil13
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Thursday, 13th January 2005 @ 04:24:52 AM in AEST
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Stop the world from spinning
Live and prevent Death from winning
But you did not listen to my words
And now everything hurts
Come back to me and make everything better
Un-write that last letter
Take back the words you said
Come back to life from the dead
But you can't and now I have to pay
I'll be without you forever and a day
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2005-01-13 04:24:52]
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Re: Without you forever and a day
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by pixie on
Thursday, 13th January 2005 @ 05:19:18 AM AEST
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very sad and deep write, suicide is for people who just can not cope with life no longer, its tragic when someone is that desperate to take their own life, I hope this pain heals for you someday *hugs*
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Re: Without you forever and a day
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by sean88 on
Thursday, 13th January 2005 @ 11:54:27 AM AEST
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This is a really deep poem and full of emotions. I hope the pain you feel will someday pass but your memories of him last long! Lovely write :).
love sean xxx |
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