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Array ( [sid] => 79810 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Broken [time] => 2005-01-13 22:13:16 [hometext] => This is quite different from how i normaly write....i just kinda went with it......hope u enjoy it....please comment [bodytext] => A broken heart can be so empty
Filled with so much nothingness
A broken soul can be so lost
Not knowing where to go next

And a broken mind can be so sane
Thoughts become so clear
An empty heart and a lost soul
Leaves me with a sane mind

Clear thoughts of death fill me
Thoughts of letting go
Never before have I felt so sane
It finally all makes sense

No other thoughts in my head
No thoughts to cloud my mind
This reality has finally hit me
As death becomes so real

But being sane is killing me
I can’t take it anymore
I need my heart to be filled
I need my soul to find its way [comments] => 3 [counter] => 593 [topic] => 59 [informant] => CrimsonTears [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => psychoticpoems )

Broken

Contributed by CrimsonTears on Thursday, 13th January 2005 @ 10:13:16 PM in AEST
Topic: psychoticpoems

A broken heart can be so empty
Filled with so much nothingness
A broken soul can be so lost
Not knowing where to go next

And a broken mind can be so sane
Thoughts become so clear
An empty heart and a lost soul
Leaves me with a sane mind

Clear thoughts of death fill me
Thoughts of letting go
Never before have I felt so sane
It finally all makes sense

No other thoughts in my head
No thoughts to cloud my mind
This reality has finally hit me
As death becomes so real

But being sane is killing me
I can’t take it anymore
I need my heart to be filled
I need my soul to find its way

Copyright Â© CrimsonTears ... [ 2005-01-13 22:13:16]
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Re: Broken (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 13th January 2005 @ 10:16:17 PM AEST
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I enjoyed this one.
It's intense but good.
Nice work.

Re: Broken (User Rating: 1 )
by silverpoppy on Friday, 14th January 2005 @ 01:31:46 AM AEST
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sanity is a burden to bare. but if you learn to set it aside life is more fun. stop looking and you will find what you need.

Re: Broken (User Rating: 1 )
by hellsfallenangel on Friday, 14th January 2005 @ 09:22:54 AM AEST
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if this is your first phsycotic poem it is really good im insane and that is the first thing to make sense to me in a long time well g2g bye

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