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Seaweed and Mirrors
Contributed by
Jezabel
on
Friday, 14th January 2005 @ 09:38:58 AM in AEST
Topic:
ambiguous
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Under
Practical sun,
The seventh house
On the block
Argues with change.
In mirrors
She sees
Echos
Of what was.
Walking
Down creative shores
Confused masses
Of seaweed
Line the edge,
Waiting
To be scooped up
Leaving this beach
Blank
Once again.
But for now
Only dogs
Run here
Barking their way
Across sand.
A pelican
Stands
On a rail.
Herald
Of the day.
Fishing is good.
Copyright ©
Jezabel
... [
2005-01-14 09:38:58]
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Re: Seaweed and Mirrors
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by autumngreeneyes on
Friday, 14th January 2005 @ 10:12:22 AM AEST
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| I visualized this..having lived in Oxnard, Ca..and being near Pelicans.. seagulls and what have you.. this was nice. |
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Re: Seaweed and Mirrors
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by waos on
Sunday, 30th January 2005 @ 01:58:01 PM AEST
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The imagery was really good in this poem. A nice simple description of things.
I liked it.
~Waos/Kara |
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Re: Seaweed and Mirrors
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 30th January 2005 @ 03:09:11 PM AEST
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love this:) hugs n' love nessa
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