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Array ( [sid] => 7986 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => they told me [time] => 2002-12-05 06:40:00 [hometext] => [bodytext] => they try to tell me your not the one
that im not really happy
that your not serious
that your in it for the fun
not to get too involved because of the games you played
not to get too emotional cuz you say you love me only to get laid
i try hard to not hear them,
to tell them all they;re wrong
i try to think and then realize we've come to far, its been too long
but then why would you want me when all we do is simply kiss,
but then why would you hurt me, if you dont love me
why lie like this
its been 8 months and still no change
i keep hearing the same stories
same tale of the games you played.
this time i saw you with my own eyes
this time my heart got broken by this so called "good guy"
this time i believed all the stories they told me were true.... i cried this time but not cuz of them
because instead of believing what they told me, from the begining,
i believed in your eyes..........
i believed in you. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 158 [topic] => 22 [informant] => TiNyOnE [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

they told me

Contributed by TiNyOnE on Thursday, 5th December 2002 @ 06:40:00 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

they try to tell me your not the one
that im not really happy
that your not serious
that your in it for the fun
not to get too involved because of the games you played
not to get too emotional cuz you say you love me only to get laid
i try hard to not hear them,
to tell them all they;re wrong
i try to think and then realize we've come to far, its been too long
but then why would you want me when all we do is simply kiss,
but then why would you hurt me, if you dont love me
why lie like this
its been 8 months and still no change
i keep hearing the same stories
same tale of the games you played.
this time i saw you with my own eyes
this time my heart got broken by this so called "good guy"
this time i believed all the stories they told me were true.... i cried this time but not cuz of them
because instead of believing what they told me, from the begining,
i believed in your eyes..........
i believed in you.

Copyright © TiNyOnE ... [ 2002-12-05 06:40:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: they told me (User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on Thursday, 5th December 2002 @ 09:44:55 AM AEST
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This is sad...i think that's why people don't look at you alot of times when they talk to you because it's not hard to see when someone is lying...and it does show all in the eyes and facial expressions....this is a good write ...one which i enjoyed alot........thankss for sharing this one ...Keep em' coming...
.:*~*:.OreO.:*~*:.

Re: they told me (User Rating: 1 )
by Daniel on Thursday, 5th December 2002 @ 02:31:07 PM AEST
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oi vey... sad. good write thou. kudos! ;0) -daniel

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