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Array ( [sid] => 79897 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Satans Smile [time] => 2005-01-14 17:54:08 [hometext] => [bodytext] => How hot will hell burn,
For a soul as black as yours?
Many people have suffered by your hand
All the blood spilled, all the tears dropped
Will be this fires fuel
How will you feel?
What will you think?
When you hear Satan's ungodly laugh!

Eternally in pain, neverending torture
Demons ravaging and clawing at your body,
Mercy is unknown to you, as it was in life
If only everyone could see you,
Pathetically screaming, crying for salvation
All of your riches cannot save you,
Stolen from the pockets of the innocent,
Disturbing but true, Satan's torture is everlasting,

No one to defend you, despair overwhelms your soul
Your ears ache from screams of the damned,
Eternally resounding off the walls of this pit.
Fear fills your body,
Your screams are instantly overpowered,
By the roars of the everburning fires
Your will broken, you cry out for forgiveness,
When Satan hears your plea, he smiles

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Satans Smile

Contributed by blacksabbath026 on Friday, 14th January 2005 @ 05:54:08 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

How hot will hell burn,
For a soul as black as yours?
Many people have suffered by your hand
All the blood spilled, all the tears dropped
Will be this fires fuel
How will you feel?
What will you think?
When you hear Satan's ungodly laugh!

Eternally in pain, neverending torture
Demons ravaging and clawing at your body,
Mercy is unknown to you, as it was in life
If only everyone could see you,
Pathetically screaming, crying for salvation
All of your riches cannot save you,
Stolen from the pockets of the innocent,
Disturbing but true, Satan's torture is everlasting,

No one to defend you, despair overwhelms your soul
Your ears ache from screams of the damned,
Eternally resounding off the walls of this pit.
Fear fills your body,
Your screams are instantly overpowered,
By the roars of the everburning fires
Your will broken, you cry out for forgiveness,
When Satan hears your plea, he smiles

Copyright © blacksabbath026 ... [ 2005-01-14 17:54:08]
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Re: Satans Smile (User Rating: 1 )
by Daniela_Maria_Violin on Friday, 14th January 2005 @ 07:22:41 PM AEST
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Very dark but well expressed.

Re: Satans Smile (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Friday, 14th January 2005 @ 08:36:04 PM AEST
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i always wonder where people get this idea of hell from. its like their thoughts are influenced by others imaginations. and i always wondered how souls could feel pain and feel...seems that the reason souls had bodies to begin with...

Re: Satans Smile (User Rating: 1 )
by arden on Tuesday, 18th January 2005 @ 05:25:18 PM AEST
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blunt lol
dark and um dark lol
honestly though, this was really cool, nicely written. i enjoyed this.
well done.
Arden

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