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Array ( [sid] => 80011 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Fear of Living [time] => 2005-01-15 17:37:10 [hometext] => here again, yeah some of my poems don't really go anywhere ,but they're feelings, they never make sense. [bodytext] => I trace your love
With my fingertips
A roadmap
Of past sorrows
How can you pick up
All the broken peices
Put them back together
For me
I see the hate
In the lines
I kiss a broken soul
With my heartless eyes
Taste your life
Eat your dreams
I am broke
I am the seed
That builds into your brain
The light that burns
My way into you
To make a freind
To tell a lie
Keep me here to struggle
Fear of life [comments] => 5 [counter] => 193 [topic] => 13 [informant] => absentangel69 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Fear of Living

Contributed by absentangel69 on Saturday, 15th January 2005 @ 05:37:10 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

I trace your love
With my fingertips
A roadmap
Of past sorrows
How can you pick up
All the broken peices
Put them back together
For me
I see the hate
In the lines
I kiss a broken soul
With my heartless eyes
Taste your life
Eat your dreams
I am broke
I am the seed
That builds into your brain
The light that burns
My way into you
To make a freind
To tell a lie
Keep me here to struggle
Fear of life

Copyright © absentangel69 ... [ 2005-01-15 17:37:10]
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Re: Fear of Living (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 15th January 2005 @ 06:02:23 PM AEST
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nice poem ,so true and sad.

Re: Fear of Living (User Rating: 1 )
by Daniela_Maria_Violin on Saturday, 15th January 2005 @ 07:07:02 PM AEST
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This makes alot of sense. Good job.

Re: Fear of Living (User Rating: 1 )
by kidpoet_213 on Saturday, 15th January 2005 @ 09:33:45 PM AEST
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Yeah this one makes a lot of sense... u're a good writer... keep it up!
~Donna~

Re: Fear of Living (User Rating: 1 )
by Rottenrioter on Saturday, 15th January 2005 @ 09:58:17 PM AEST
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this is one of few i actually like...keep up the good writing

Re: Fear of Living (User Rating: 1 )
by Sheveg on Thursday, 10th June 2010 @ 12:00:36 PM AEST
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It sounds like you were hurting when you wrote this.
Sherry

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