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Array ( [sid] => 80106 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => DAD [time] => 2005-01-16 14:49:00 [hometext] => I only recently started writing poetry. This is the very first poem I wrote. [bodytext] => I know you probably don't
Know it
Because I know I don't
Show it
You mean so much
To me
Without you I could
Never be
I don't try to let
You down
That's why I never
Stay around
Sometimes I feel
So ashamed
I only have myself
To blame
I love you with
All my heart
Thinking you might not know this
Tears me apart
I love you and I want you
To know it
I'll do my very best to try and
Show it.
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DAD

Contributed by Evilnn on Sunday, 16th January 2005 @ 02:49:00 PM in AEST
Topic: FamilyPoems

I know you probably don't
Know it
Because I know I don't
Show it
You mean so much
To me
Without you I could
Never be
I don't try to let
You down
That's why I never
Stay around
Sometimes I feel
So ashamed
I only have myself
To blame
I love you with
All my heart
Thinking you might not know this
Tears me apart
I love you and I want you
To know it
I'll do my very best to try and
Show it.

Copyright © Evilnn ... [ 2005-01-16 14:49:00]
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Re: DAD (User Rating: 1 )
by afterdark on Sunday, 16th January 2005 @ 03:00:13 PM AEST
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Really to bad others on this ite do not feel the same..Good write.

Re: DAD (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Sunday, 16th January 2005 @ 03:13:28 PM AEST
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This is really good for a first poem.. Glad you shared it..
Thank you
Jenni

Re: DAD (User Rating: 1 )
by Kuro_Mirai on Sunday, 16th January 2005 @ 05:17:52 PM AEST
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Great job. I'm the same way with my father, I don't show that I love him, but I really do. You did great with this.

Re: DAD (User Rating: 1 )
by Whitelightning77 on Sunday, 16th January 2005 @ 07:22:35 PM AEST
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Good write and thanks for sharing. time is short and if the feelings are there, then share them. Too many times anger or fear gets in the way and then when one passes, it is too late for the conversations that folks *wished* they had.

welcome and again, thanks for sharing

Re: DAD (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Monday, 17th January 2005 @ 12:16:33 AM AEST
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you wrote better on your first poem than ive done on my first 50! excellent write.

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