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Array ( [sid] => 80151 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The moment you relized you are nothing to everyone [time] => 2005-01-16 20:06:46 [hometext] => ... [bodytext] => And i can still smell you on my sheet.
And now I know what it feels like to be crushed.
And now I know what it feels like to be a novelty.
And now I know what it feels like to be drowned
by someone you love.

Its all over but I'm still choking on the lies.
How can we go on living line after line?
I can only stich myself up so many times.
How can all this have happened in less than a day?
Then again it wouldn't have been the first time you threw us all away.
I've waited so long for someone like you
to fill my days with ruin.
Every smile is a painful reminder
of how I let you continue.

All the tears in the world could never stop.
All the heartbreaking wreckage.
You did that.
I love that I can't get enough, but I'd be lying if I said that I didn't expect it.
You've past me twice, but our eyes haven't met again.
You turned my world into remnants of blood in my sink.
Will you pick up the pieces again?
Or let them fall to ashes in yor pretty hands again?

You walk all over me.
It's all over but I'm still choking on the lies.
You walk all over me.
The pain ensues.
Knives can only go so deep.
You have penetrated the hardest heart.
And now I can't help but to return the favor. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 166 [topic] => 13 [informant] => skelington [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 14 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

The moment you relized you are nothing to everyone

Contributed by skelington on Sunday, 16th January 2005 @ 08:06:46 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

And i can still smell you on my sheet.
And now I know what it feels like to be crushed.
And now I know what it feels like to be a novelty.
And now I know what it feels like to be drowned
by someone you love.

Its all over but I'm still choking on the lies.
How can we go on living line after line?
I can only stich myself up so many times.
How can all this have happened in less than a day?
Then again it wouldn't have been the first time you threw us all away.
I've waited so long for someone like you
to fill my days with ruin.
Every smile is a painful reminder
of how I let you continue.

All the tears in the world could never stop.
All the heartbreaking wreckage.
You did that.
I love that I can't get enough, but I'd be lying if I said that I didn't expect it.
You've past me twice, but our eyes haven't met again.
You turned my world into remnants of blood in my sink.
Will you pick up the pieces again?
Or let them fall to ashes in yor pretty hands again?

You walk all over me.
It's all over but I'm still choking on the lies.
You walk all over me.
The pain ensues.
Knives can only go so deep.
You have penetrated the hardest heart.
And now I can't help but to return the favor.

Copyright © skelington ... [ 2005-01-16 20:06:46]
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Re: The moment you relized you are nothing to everyone (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Sunday, 16th January 2005 @ 08:30:25 PM AEST
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=] very nice indeedy.

Re: The moment you relized you are nothing to everyone (User Rating: 1 )
by waos on Sunday, 16th January 2005 @ 09:47:32 PM AEST
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That was really good. I thought you did a really good job of showing
how you felt, and putting it into words powerfully, I thought that you were
original and used imagery/metaphor type ideas really well. Good job.

~waos/kara

Re: The moment you relized you are nothing to everyone (User Rating: 1 )
by little_genna on Monday, 17th January 2005 @ 10:22:36 AM AEST
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u have interesting imgery..
This poem is amazing.
i felt every word and your emotions just pour from it.
I love poetry like this that have so much power behind them but its not always a forceful power.

Nice one dude!

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