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The music fades away
Along with all of this pain
As I use the razor blade

I'm lost in the darkness
Till the sun comes up
I'm drowning in the emptiness
Unable to rise above

I'm getting what I wanted
Since happiness couldn't be gotten
I've gotten what I wanted
With all this blood that's fallen

I don't need
To bleed

I just need to die this way
With the music that fades away
Along with all of this pain
As I use the razor blade

To end this perfect day
And this life that's meant nothing anyway [comments] => 5 [counter] => 198 [topic] => 36 [informant] => essentially9 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 7 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )

Perfect End

Contributed by essentially9 on Sunday, 16th January 2005 @ 09:00:06 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

Perfect End

The music fades away
Along with all of this pain
As I use the razor blade

I'm lost in the darkness
Till the sun comes up
I'm drowning in the emptiness
Unable to rise above

I'm getting what I wanted
Since happiness couldn't be gotten
I've gotten what I wanted
With all this blood that's fallen

I don't need
To bleed

I just need to die this way
With the music that fades away
Along with all of this pain
As I use the razor blade

To end this perfect day
And this life that's meant nothing anyway

Copyright © essentially9 ... [ 2005-01-16 21:00:06]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Perfect End (User Rating: 1 )
by xfrozenwindx on Sunday, 16th January 2005 @ 09:51:08 PM AEST
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That is sad, I hope you don't always feel that way. Things will get better.
Excellent write! You did a great job, hope to hear more poems from you soon.
-Ashley

Re: Perfect End (User Rating: 1 )
by mina-1 on Monday, 17th January 2005 @ 02:46:06 AM AEST
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such a sad write.
on the other hand it's written so well
keep up the great work.
Hope things have perked up 4 u

Re: Perfect End (User Rating: 1 )
by little_genna on Monday, 17th January 2005 @ 10:11:44 AM AEST
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woah this one hit my heart.
it is written with such a powerful emotion.
i know everyone says that things will perk up....
...harsh reality they only will if you want them to.
Im going to read this again and again its such a good poem...

Re: Perfect End (User Rating: 1 )
by afterdark on Monday, 17th January 2005 @ 12:51:16 PM AEST
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Another fine job..Give yourself more credit cause damnitt you should be getting a helluva lot more.

Re: Perfect End (User Rating: 1 )
by wolfman on Monday, 17th January 2005 @ 01:28:14 PM AEST
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this peom is very sad I dont exactly know what you are going through but I do have an idea I do hope that you are able to get through this and not make a mistakeso please dont give up.

this is an interesting piece its so simple and yeat so deep it tells much with few words very well writen I do like it, but please tell me that this is just you writing and not something that you are thinking about. hope to read mor of your work later.

wolfman

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