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The Plain White Light Of The Morning
Contributed by
declinefoale
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Monday, 17th January 2005 @ 10:29:43 AM in AEST
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The plain white light of the morning
Peered in to the room of two people
The unstoppable force Of a new begining
Gliding through the room
Over every inch of darkness
It found every nook-and-cranny
And chased the shadows backwards
The glass through which the lightness came
Was now engulfedin the bright white light
As was the room of two people
One of which lay dorment, one of which lay watching
The darkness was now cowering
In the most secret of all places
There the shadows lay in wait, waiting for the night
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Re: The Plain White Light Of The Morning
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 17th January 2005 @ 10:35:18 AM AEST
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nice.
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Re: The Plain White Light Of The Morning
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by Essentially9 on
Monday, 25th April 2005 @ 09:39:23 PM AEST
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| great write. seems kind of pointless though. but then it is basically describing something, so not really. i think making this longer would be better. |
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Re: The Plain White Light Of The Morning
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by Justalady on
Wednesday, 11th May 2005 @ 10:25:58 PM AEST
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| I love the title, and it holds a sort of mystery except that somehow the reference to the Two people doesn't seem to find a place for me. I think the subject of the light would be enough if a little more was wrote about it. A very good subject and good potential. June |
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