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Array ( [sid] => 80257 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => She Was Calling.... [time] => 2005-01-17 13:35:57 [hometext] => I've not written in a while about a year or so so i hope it's not terrible... [bodytext] => The lovers met a while back
about a year ago or so
glued to each others lips
Like the stickiest of dough

Everything was so perfect
Too good to be true
She was secretly unhappy
She told everyone, she told you

But you say she never spoke of it
Truthfully though anyone could see the distress in her eye
Though you too blind by love to see,
Somewhere knew she went home to cry

Her family disgusted by the state she was in
She never said a word frightened by the abuse
Her father so large and pathetic
Put her through

So really it's not surprising
The note was left unwritten unsigned
Because truthfully
there was no one there to read it

[comments] => 2 [counter] => 156 [topic] => 36 [informant] => Dying_Angel [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )

She Was Calling....

Contributed by Dying_Angel on Monday, 17th January 2005 @ 01:35:57 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

The lovers met a while back
about a year ago or so
glued to each others lips
Like the stickiest of dough

Everything was so perfect
Too good to be true
She was secretly unhappy
She told everyone, she told you

But you say she never spoke of it
Truthfully though anyone could see the distress in her eye
Though you too blind by love to see,
Somewhere knew she went home to cry

Her family disgusted by the state she was in
She never said a word frightened by the abuse
Her father so large and pathetic
Put her through

So really it's not surprising
The note was left unwritten unsigned
Because truthfully
there was no one there to read it

Copyright © Dying_Angel ... [ 2005-01-17 13:35:57]
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Re: She Was Calling.... (User Rating: 1 )
by wolfman on Monday, 17th January 2005 @ 01:53:45 PM AEST
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that is teribale, havin to suffer through such an ordeal as being in love but not have any I dont know how people are able to be in love and not have it or give it this is sad and these are the thoughts that I would have as well but I dont think that I would be able to go through with it no matter how much pain I was going through... (sighs)

this is a goood poem i like how its no singald to one person but a whole family ( I do hope that its not true and if it is I am sorry for you and I will be praying for you) it show a wider perspective in a non - violent aproach, this was very good. please post again.

wolfman

Re: She Was Calling.... (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 17th January 2005 @ 01:54:33 PM AEST
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Sad and terribly true to many. Very though provoking, very emotional. A great overall write. Good job.

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