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The morning light bright and true
Through the dawns mist it shins true
The mountins cast their shadow down
From the suns rays all around
there is no other place like this on Earth
Only God knows its true worth

Here I sit and watch the wild
It's beauty untamed and yeat so mild
How I got here I do not know
But any other place I would not go
My thoughts are lost in this, natures maze
My heart, with the wilderness it playes
Why so many dont see somber in this sight
Must be a disease, I would not want to suffer its plight

With the animals my will finds rest
For with no human must I contest
The gental river sings me a melody
to "civilize" such a place should be a felony
So I will leave your inocents for now
But I will return to stay, someday some how.

"Goody bye wild"
he breaths deep
"Tell next time." [comments] => 5 [counter] => 170 [topic] => 27 [informant] => wolfman [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => NaturePoetry )

Solace with out

Contributed by wolfman on Monday, 17th January 2005 @ 03:29:32 PM in AEST
Topic: NaturePoetry

Solace with out

The morning light bright and true
Through the dawns mist it shins true
The mountins cast their shadow down
From the suns rays all around
there is no other place like this on Earth
Only God knows its true worth

Here I sit and watch the wild
It's beauty untamed and yeat so mild
How I got here I do not know
But any other place I would not go
My thoughts are lost in this, natures maze
My heart, with the wilderness it playes
Why so many dont see somber in this sight
Must be a disease, I would not want to suffer its plight

With the animals my will finds rest
For with no human must I contest
The gental river sings me a melody
to "civilize" such a place should be a felony
So I will leave your inocents for now
But I will return to stay, someday some how.

"Goody bye wild"
he breaths deep
"Tell next time."

Copyright © wolfman ... [ 2005-01-17 15:29:32]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Solace with out (User Rating: 1 )
by Fionndruinne on Monday, 17th January 2005 @ 03:46:27 PM AEST
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Bravo, bravo! Me likes it a lot. And, of course, I feel quite the same way.
I enjoyed the thoughtfulness of this well-expressed piece. Well done, well done.

Andrew

(Reminds me of my childhood, when we'd go wherever we went, and do whatever it was we did...)

Re: Solace with out (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Monday, 17th January 2005 @ 04:02:24 PM AEST
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you work is good enough that you dont have to ask for comments. you have some grammar errors, but besides that you wrote this very well. this reminded me of call of the wild. i never finished that book, even though ive started it a couple of times. keep up the good work, josh.

Re: Solace with out (User Rating: 1 )
by MoonlitAngel on Monday, 17th January 2005 @ 08:24:45 PM AEST
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spelling errors aside, I quite liked this. great description. made me feel calm :)

Re: Solace with out (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 21st January 2005 @ 12:04:40 AM AEST
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It sounds absolutely beautiful. Such a nice descriptive write. Blessings!

Re: Solace with out (User Rating: 1 )
by Wachumiri on Friday, 4th February 2005 @ 04:35:40 PM AEST
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A really well-done piece, my friend. And I thought you had bad memories from that trip.
Well, take care.
David

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