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From the inside out.
But start slowly,
Inching your way in
Masking your sinister intents;
Leaving me gullible
With a false pretense.
Then engulf me with your hatred,
Punish me for what you’ve said
Take me as your victim,
And begin your malicious process:
Swallow my fluids,
Gnaw on my organs,
Pierce my spinal cord,
Drain my strength,
And consume my soul. [comments] => 7 [counter] => 210 [topic] => 56 [informant] => cuddlytiger17 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => sarcasticpoetry )

I'm Giving You My Permission

Contributed by cuddlytiger17 on Monday, 17th January 2005 @ 06:46:57 PM in AEST
Topic: sarcasticpoetry

Eat me alive
From the inside out.
But start slowly,
Inching your way in
Masking your sinister intents;
Leaving me gullible
With a false pretense.
Then engulf me with your hatred,
Punish me for what you’ve said
Take me as your victim,
And begin your malicious process:
Swallow my fluids,
Gnaw on my organs,
Pierce my spinal cord,
Drain my strength,
And consume my soul.

Copyright Â© cuddlytiger17 ... [ 2005-01-17 18:46:57]
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Re: I'm Giving You My Permission (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 17th January 2005 @ 07:15:17 PM AEST
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Intense write.

Re: I'm Giving You My Permission (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Monday, 17th January 2005 @ 08:11:17 PM AEST
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...this poem has made me realize that ive spent too much time in biology...other than that good write.

Re: I'm Giving You My Permission (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 17th January 2005 @ 09:34:54 PM AEST
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"A meal in itself" lol Seriously though, good write.

Re: I'm Giving You My Permission (User Rating: 1 )
by Avarice_Riot on Monday, 17th January 2005 @ 09:49:38 PM AEST
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Great write! I can imagine all sorts of sordid imagery here and in my current state of mind I can say I understand this piece very well. Once again, great write, I love it.

Re: I'm Giving You My Permission (User Rating: 1 )
by classicfailedhero on Monday, 17th January 2005 @ 10:00:23 PM AEST
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pretty good, pretty neat

Re: I'm Giving You My Permission (User Rating: 1 )
by the_Ghost_Moth on Tuesday, 25th January 2005 @ 10:50:58 PM AEST
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Seems like you are experimenting
here with a little gore.
Bitter stuff,
but I like that you are using
imaginative phrases.
--Ghosty

Re: I'm Giving You My Permission (User Rating: 1 )
by Silent-No-More on Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 08:39:49 PM AEST
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Scarcasm.... gosh it's just soooooo useful sometimes, isn't it? THIS is something I could see myself writing on a bad day but never being brave enough to post. Yeah for you for getting it out and putting it out there!!!!!

~SNM~

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