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And you’re the only one invited
Change out of your work clothes and come with me
You being alone is a wrong that must be righted

I hope my car is not too small for your slender legs
I hope the music is just what you wanted to hear
Because I’m ready to do it like round holes and square pegs
And don’t you forget that we’ve got five big kegs of beer

Follow me to the basement door
Yes, that’s it, right down there
Sorry about the mildew smell but I’m really poor
Watch your step and don’t get the spider webs in your hair

See this plaque? I got it in the tenth grade
That’s weird, I see the same letters on your face
You can close your eyes but it won’t stop me from getting laid
Now you’re going to have to let me divide you up if you want to leave this place

I’ll give you a ride home in the morning on my way to school
Wow, I didn’t know that you live in a garbage dump
Wish me luck and I know that I’ll play it cool
Oh thank you my dear, I already see another one that I’d like to make into a stump [comments] => 5 [counter] => 181 [topic] => 59 [informant] => kratur [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => psychoticpoems )
Just the Two of Us

Contributed by kratur on Monday, 17th January 2005 @ 09:56:18 PM in AEST
Topic: psychoticpoems



I’m having a great big party
And you’re the only one invited
Change out of your work clothes and come with me
You being alone is a wrong that must be righted

I hope my car is not too small for your slender legs
I hope the music is just what you wanted to hear
Because I’m ready to do it like round holes and square pegs
And don’t you forget that we’ve got five big kegs of beer

Follow me to the basement door
Yes, that’s it, right down there
Sorry about the mildew smell but I’m really poor
Watch your step and don’t get the spider webs in your hair

See this plaque? I got it in the tenth grade
That’s weird, I see the same letters on your face
You can close your eyes but it won’t stop me from getting laid
Now you’re going to have to let me divide you up if you want to leave this place

I’ll give you a ride home in the morning on my way to school
Wow, I didn’t know that you live in a garbage dump
Wish me luck and I know that I’ll play it cool
Oh thank you my dear, I already see another one that I’d like to make into a stump




Copyright © kratur ... [ 2005-01-17 21:56:18]
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Re: Just the Two of Us (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Monday, 17th January 2005 @ 10:07:25 PM AEST
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muy interesante.


Re: Just the Two of Us (User Rating: 1 )
by Vampirequeen on Monday, 17th January 2005 @ 10:25:45 PM AEST
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hmm interesting.


Re: Just the Two of Us (User Rating: 1 )
by deadheadpoet on Tuesday, 18th January 2005 @ 02:04:35 AM AEST
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Interestingly twisted.


Re: Just the Two of Us (User Rating: 1 )
by Kellros on Tuesday, 18th January 2005 @ 08:42:26 AM AEST
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ah i see it now, just have to read it again. Reminds me of some story on sci fi channel once where this guy chopped up like dead girls and made him a "perfect" one. Twisted just like allot of things in life and on tv.


Re: Just the Two of Us (User Rating: 1 )
by Gimpie on Tuesday, 18th January 2005 @ 04:26:03 PM AEST
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sadistic.....I love it!!!




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