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Array ( [sid] => 80379 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => losing her reality part 2 [time] => 2005-01-18 04:53:18 [hometext] => This is the second part to the revealing yet tells nothing poem I wrote yesterday.....it is unfinished as with yesterday's one...in hope that maybe a third part will follow....comments appreciated. [bodytext] =>

Playing contemptuous games,
She goes by many names,
She wants to show herself but she has no love,
Love for her personality above.
Low self esteem,
Never really been part of a team.
Helps everyone else but never herself.
Inside she is her lonely self.
Been along time since she opened up,
Finds it too hard to let someone close up.
She wants to be secure,
Has little trust she needs to be sure,
You won’t judge her…

SJ

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losing her reality part 2

Contributed by little_genna on Tuesday, 18th January 2005 @ 04:53:18 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Playing contemptuous games,
She goes by many names,
She wants to show herself but she has no love,
Love for her personality above.
Low self esteem,
Never really been part of a team.
Helps everyone else but never herself.
Inside she is her lonely self.
Been along time since she opened up,
Finds it too hard to let someone close up.
She wants to be secure,
Has little trust she needs to be sure,
You won’t judge her…

SJ

Copyright © little_genna ... [ 2005-01-18 04:53:18]
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Re: losing her reality part 2 (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Tuesday, 18th January 2005 @ 05:46:00 AM AEST
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I certainly hope there's a part two 'cause this write even tho sad it's still a masterpeice. We need more writing like this.
Our teens have so much to contend with these days. It's no wonder they wonna die.
Keep writing!
luv, huggs,
emy

Re: losing her reality part 2 (User Rating: 1 )
by wolfman on Tuesday, 18th January 2005 @ 04:22:35 PM AEST
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those who help others with out thought of being compinsated do live in themselves for it is hard to be so in this world, we help others when they dont see us so they wont know that it was us and to keep it a secrite we must go inside our selves, sad but true, and when you are like that for any amount of time you tend to fear having any one gewt to close to you that is why many of us are alone, we use different names for ourselves because we dont want others to know the true us which makes it incresinly difficult to make real friends which lowers our self esteem, and all of this makes others judge us they think that we have no love in our lives, but the thing is that we have an abundence of it just no where to put it so we set it aside, forgwet it then eventualy lose it, and in essence we lose ourselves too.

thank you for posting more about her, if no oe elsa I thank you. this is similwer to your last (first) one very discriptive with the imigery and agasin you leave us wanting more. well I'm off to read the next one.

wolfman

Re: losing her reality part 2 (User Rating: 1 )
by Mangs on Wednesday, 19th January 2005 @ 09:21:47 AM AEST
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I thought I'd share with you a few thoughts about speech. Don't take it lightly princess. If music is the pathway to the heart as Voltaire suggested, then speech is the pathway to other people. Live in silence and you live alone.

Talk to me....

Love Always,
Umang

Re: losing her reality part 2 (User Rating: 1 )
by morgana on Wednesday, 19th January 2005 @ 05:47:45 PM AEST
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i love it!

Re: losing her reality part 2 (User Rating: 1 )
by XxXMcCathyXxX on Sunday, 6th November 2005 @ 01:05:38 PM AEST
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Wowie! Awsome!

Re: losing her reality part 2 (User Rating: 1 )
by gmcse8 on Monday, 20th February 2006 @ 11:08:42 AM AEST
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NO DANGER IN NOT OPENING UP, NO OPPORTUNITIES EITHER, WONDER IF THAT ARMOR IS IMPENTATRABLE?

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