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Love on sale
Contributed by
jace
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Tuesday, 18th January 2005 @ 12:06:09 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I was lossing my self in you eyes so grand
when it struck me
That how much better life would be if I never let go of your hand
and so I got down on one knee
I Begged for a reprieve and a paper of legal status
evan though the juge would laugh at us
You see your a nanny for 3 lovely children that you adore
while thy don't argue or fuss
thier parents are poor
My pathetic job can suport this dream
who new there was a price tag on a love
and I am trying so hard to keep knit this ever bursting seam
Like a dove
i search but I cant find
you fly so high
I get left behind
If I said I was meant to be with you that would be a lie
I self imposed my self on you
and now I am off the ground and I caf
but I cant afford to let you go
To majestic to capture
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jace
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2005-01-18 12:06:09]
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Re: Love on sale
(User Rating: 1 )
by darkestpetal on
Tuesday, 18th January 2005 @ 02:20:27 PM AEST
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| intense write |
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Re: Love on sale
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 18th January 2005 @ 02:44:07 PM AEST
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its very different but i like it alot.
well done |
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Re: Love on sale
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by jace on
Wednesday, 19th January 2005 @ 10:56:03 AM AEST
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| my appologies the caf world actually should be can't fly man I am horrible |
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