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Array ( [sid] => 80585 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Steadfast Vengeance From Shadow [time] => 2005-01-19 16:26:53 [hometext] => The first of a series of poems that set the stage for the story titled 'The Amygdaline Diaries: Of Bloodshed In Utero' [bodytext] => Choose your way to bleed,
While the umbilical noose is wrapped,
About his neck.
Your sin shapes the steel on his spine,
And the Mourning Star is drowning,
In the rain of her celestial view.

You attempted to asphyxiate the Prophecy,
Thus begetting the immortal.
The savior will rise,
To hail the tyranny,
With holocaustic pupils drenched in flame.
Likewise were the eyes,
That turned Voletia’s back upon your blade.

In the light of all betrayal,
You’ll not stagger to know,
The vivisectionists stiletto,
Has wrapped its gaze ‘round your throat.
And vengeance is found within the outcast duo,
Plagued with evading your grasp.

Cloaked within the exterior of the Contemporaries,
Veilian will yield the manifestation of the Prophecy.
Amygdaline will spill the savior’s destiny,
Across his seething palette,
And forever wilt he be indebted,
To his mother’s husband.

The deficit need be paid in naught,
But the blood of the one,
Who played his son’s life forfeit,
And claimed lordship,
Above the discourse of the Apostles.

Indignation has set ablaze,
The task set forth for the couple.
They will bring up the one,
To bring you to prostration.
His appetite for the carnal cuisine,
Has yet to mature,
And when he finally comprehends his worth,
The people will talk,
Of you being smote,
Into shadow and agony.
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Steadfast Vengeance From Shadow

Contributed by savingmarion on Wednesday, 19th January 2005 @ 04:26:53 PM in AEST
Topic: fictional

Choose your way to bleed,
While the umbilical noose is wrapped,
About his neck.
Your sin shapes the steel on his spine,
And the Mourning Star is drowning,
In the rain of her celestial view.

You attempted to asphyxiate the Prophecy,
Thus begetting the immortal.
The savior will rise,
To hail the tyranny,
With holocaustic pupils drenched in flame.
Likewise were the eyes,
That turned Voletia’s back upon your blade.

In the light of all betrayal,
You’ll not stagger to know,
The vivisectionists stiletto,
Has wrapped its gaze ‘round your throat.
And vengeance is found within the outcast duo,
Plagued with evading your grasp.

Cloaked within the exterior of the Contemporaries,
Veilian will yield the manifestation of the Prophecy.
Amygdaline will spill the savior’s destiny,
Across his seething palette,
And forever wilt he be indebted,
To his mother’s husband.

The deficit need be paid in naught,
But the blood of the one,
Who played his son’s life forfeit,
And claimed lordship,
Above the discourse of the Apostles.

Indignation has set ablaze,
The task set forth for the couple.
They will bring up the one,
To bring you to prostration.
His appetite for the carnal cuisine,
Has yet to mature,
And when he finally comprehends his worth,
The people will talk,
Of you being smote,
Into shadow and agony.

Copyright Â© savingmarion ... [ 2005-01-19 16:26:53]
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Re: Steadfast Vengeance From Shadow (User Rating: 1 )
by hardrocker15198916 on Wednesday, 22nd June 2005 @ 07:29:32 PM AEST
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i am not quite sure what to say about this poem.it has onderful vocabulary and it kinda sounds like you are talking about jesus and then it doesnt so i dont know what to think of it really but its a good poem all in all

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