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The girl was hopeless, her name; Claire
Her fangs were sharp and her skin was irresistibly bare
Her thoughts were foggy as though her character had been hardly there
She peered out at the unarming chaos
and innocently threatened to savor a bite
She uncrossed her legs and moved swiftly; her movement so light
The scenery now begged for her to terrify; staring at her their muscles clenched tight
She opened her arms as blackness arrived
At that moment the only sight was the red of her eyes
Soon there was an intense cold that had seemed to arise
As soon as the dreadful pain had suddenly immersed
She was mysteriously gone leaving them with an incurable thirst
She innocently smiled at the ignorant chaos
That she had now cursed
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Desolate Demon

Contributed by QueenEEliz33 on Wednesday, 19th January 2005 @ 06:50:09 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

A Desolate Demon
The girl was hopeless, her name; Claire
Her fangs were sharp and her skin was irresistibly bare
Her thoughts were foggy as though her character had been hardly there
She peered out at the unarming chaos
and innocently threatened to savor a bite
She uncrossed her legs and moved swiftly; her movement so light
The scenery now begged for her to terrify; staring at her their muscles clenched tight
She opened her arms as blackness arrived
At that moment the only sight was the red of her eyes
Soon there was an intense cold that had seemed to arise
As soon as the dreadful pain had suddenly immersed
She was mysteriously gone leaving them with an incurable thirst
She innocently smiled at the ignorant chaos
That she had now cursed

Copyright © QueenEEliz33 ... [ 2005-01-19 18:50:09]
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Re: Desolate Demon (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 20th August 2005 @ 04:09:01 PM AEST
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dark . it gripped me and forgot to let go..loved it

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