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Array ( [sid] => 80610 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Daddy [time] => 2005-01-19 19:26:36 [hometext] => [bodytext] => A father like no other
A friend one would die for
With eyes that made me smile
Made me love him even more

He pushed me on the swing
That day I would never forget
Playing out in the pouring rain
Coming home soaking wet

We made tents every night
And told stories together
In my heart I knew
He would be here forever

That one night
Asleep in my tent
I head a loud noise
That came from the basement

As I krept slowly down
I begin to see red
I see his body there
And a note that said

"If you are reading this, I must no longer be alive, You can try and try, I
will not revive. To my darling wife and daughter, I'm sorry, and I know its not fair .
But just cause you can't see me, doesn't mean I'm not there.Who ever finds me,
Let everyone know, I'll always be with them,and that I love them so."

Right then and there
I begin to cry
God why oh why
Did daddy have to die

I screamed for my mommy
She came running down
When she saw daddy
She fell to the ground

A few weeks later
They buried him deep
I tried to be strong
But I began to weep

After It was over
I looked up to see
Daddy's angel
looking down on me

__________________

I know its not that good..
but vote/comment...
[comments] => 8 [counter] => 172 [topic] => 32 [informant] => xxbreexx [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )
Daddy

Contributed by xxbreexx on Wednesday, 19th January 2005 @ 07:26:36 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry



A father like no other
A friend one would die for
With eyes that made me smile
Made me love him even more

He pushed me on the swing
That day I would never forget
Playing out in the pouring rain
Coming home soaking wet

We made tents every night
And told stories together
In my heart I knew
He would be here forever

That one night
Asleep in my tent
I head a loud noise
That came from the basement

As I krept slowly down
I begin to see red
I see his body there
And a note that said

"If you are reading this, I must no longer be alive, You can try and try, I
will not revive. To my darling wife and daughter, I'm sorry, and I know its not fair .
But just cause you can't see me, doesn't mean I'm not there.Who ever finds me,
Let everyone know, I'll always be with them,and that I love them so."

Right then and there
I begin to cry
God why oh why
Did daddy have to die

I screamed for my mommy
She came running down
When she saw daddy
She fell to the ground

A few weeks later
They buried him deep
I tried to be strong
But I began to weep

After It was over
I looked up to see
Daddy's angel
looking down on me

__________________

I know its not that good..
but vote/comment...




Copyright © xxbreexx ... [ 2005-01-19 19:26:36]
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Re: Daddy (User Rating: 1 )
by english-pea-pelter on Wednesday, 19th January 2005 @ 07:35:03 PM AEST
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wonderful poetry. im so sorry. symathys to someone who found their brother with a slit throat. and another brother addicted to anti-depressents. i just posted a poem about my brother (his name is rupert) and its titled "my dear" comments appreciated. lovely read on this!!

much love ^^" english-pea-pelter


Re: Daddy (User Rating: 1 )
by Blu on Wednesday, 19th January 2005 @ 07:37:36 PM AEST
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Very good write. I'm sorry to hear about your loss, but atleast you have a creative avenue to let out the grief. Keep them coming.

Blu


Re: Daddy (User Rating: 1 )
by XxBreexX on Wednesday, 19th January 2005 @ 07:39:56 PM AEST
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thanks for ur comments everyone..i forgot to mention that this didnt happen to me..its not about me..tho, it is a relation of a friend of mine..

thanks everyone :D


Re: Daddy (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 19th January 2005 @ 07:42:21 PM AEST
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My deepest sympathy goes out to you. Our fathers stay with us always...
By the way...don't be so down on yourself. You are quite talented.


Re: Daddy (User Rating: 1 )
by Live2Die on Wednesday, 19th January 2005 @ 09:13:56 PM AEST
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Thats really good! I'm just sorry you had to experience that...


Re: Daddy (User Rating: 1 )
by Bohemian_with_a_pen on Thursday, 20th January 2005 @ 06:25:04 AM AEST
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awesome!! well done


Re: Daddy (User Rating: 1 )
by XxBreexX on Thursday, 20th January 2005 @ 01:38:28 PM AEST
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THANKS EVERYONE BUT I SAID UP THERE THAT THIS DIDNT HAPPEN TO ME...BUT ITS A RELATION TO MY BEST FRIEND..THANK YOU EVERYONE :D


Re: Daddy (User Rating: 1 )
by Rhei76 on Monday, 26th February 2007 @ 10:29:13 AM AEST
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Very depressing
hope this really didn't happen
it is a good write
totally changed my mood




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