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Boxed in Chains
Contributed by
QueenEEliz33
on
Wednesday, 19th January 2005 @ 08:37:33 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Boxed in Chains
Time stops
Breathe it in hard
Feather light
Never ending night
People passing
Circle tightening
Voice and breath
Blocking Brick
Shooting tension
No one saved
The end is close
Never shows
Always stuck
To tight to reach
Isolation
No answer, no reward
Throat cut close
Not close enough
Enough
Feel the pain
Bleeding
Not enough to sleep
Step in and forever pause in time
Breathe out
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2005-01-19 20:37:33]
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Re: Boxed in Chains
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Thursday, 20th January 2005 @ 02:42:02 PM AEST
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| I really like the style. It makes you read in a breathless sort of way. well done |
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