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Criticism
Contributed by
Elisabeth
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Friday, 6th December 2002 @ 03:20:00 PM in AEST
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MiscPoems
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The plague is with no exception purer
Freelance junkie full of furor
Fusty ways to purge
Reviled uproar
Fastidious pundit whispers to his pulpit
The critic...to be continued...
Should be terminated
Will be fulminated
We need not you to defeat the purpose of trying
Puncture the paper with your red pen
Judged- can only be a sin
Of those and you who love to live
The plague is with no exception an obstacle
As seen from falling from the goal
Quit smoking critique
Except to accept
Copyright ©
Elisabeth
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2002-12-06 15:20:00]
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Re: Criticism
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by hooray_its_jen on
Monday, 28th June 2004 @ 07:26:49 PM AEST
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Elisabeth, honey, we all face those kinds of people in life. Most of those people that criticise (did I spell that right?) are only taking out their anger on others, or trying to feel more secure about themselves by making others feel insecure. I have had some bad experiences with people judging me, for my height, for my hair color, for the stupidest things imaginable and it hurts for them to say or think all of that about me. Trust me, we have all experienced feelings like this and you are definitely not alone.
Your poem is one that all people can relate to, and it takes someone very talented to write a poem like that. I loved reading all your work, you are such a great writer. I just wish you'd post more of your poems, but the greatest things in life don't come along too often. This one is also my favorite of all your work. Take care!
Blessings
Love, Jenna |
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