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Array ( [sid] => 80688 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Plain fantasy [time] => 2005-01-20 08:48:48 [hometext] => Τhere’s something missing in this poem, I guess it’s the introductory verse, like starting it in the middle of a thought. That’s how it happened and I’m sorry I can’t do nothing about it, difficult to get in the same mood. [bodytext] => Even inspiration has flown away
Faded away as your memory fades
There’s little left to keep me tuned
Crumbs of those joyous, edgy days
With you the only thought in my mind

I try to hold on to you
But there awaits only pain
Remnant memories of you
Wither and decay
As time wipes out everything

And there it dies
A love that never was
Was never meant to be
Conceived in our minds
Sheer, plain fantasy
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Plain fantasy

Contributed by SilmorilM on Thursday, 20th January 2005 @ 08:48:48 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

Even inspiration has flown away
Faded away as your memory fades
There’s little left to keep me tuned
Crumbs of those joyous, edgy days
With you the only thought in my mind

I try to hold on to you
But there awaits only pain
Remnant memories of you
Wither and decay
As time wipes out everything

And there it dies
A love that never was
Was never meant to be
Conceived in our minds
Sheer, plain fantasy

Copyright © SilmorilM ... [ 2005-01-20 08:48:48]
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Re: Plain fantasy (User Rating: 1 )
by TaintedSoul on Thursday, 20th January 2005 @ 09:33:29 AM AEST
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Emotionally heartfelt write. However, that first stanza could use a thesaurus so there is no repetition of words. Other than that, nicely penned.

peace
TS

Re: Plain fantasy (User Rating: 1 )
by prozac_memory on Thursday, 20th January 2005 @ 09:58:07 AM AEST
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i like this poem alot, thanks for sharing
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Re: Plain fantasy (User Rating: 1 )
by Stitch on Thursday, 20th January 2005 @ 11:51:57 AM AEST
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Intriguing and well said.
Stitch

Re: Plain fantasy (User Rating: 1 )
by jace on Thursday, 20th January 2005 @ 01:19:42 PM AEST
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great write your intro will come to you later

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