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Array ( [sid] => 80827 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Feeling down [time] => 2005-01-21 05:21:35 [hometext] => the way i was feeling it totally sucked [bodytext] => Depressed
Feeling down
Tears begging to pour
Heart throbbing ready to burst
My mind tossing and turning
Wanting a way out
Needing to find a way out
Trapped inside
Locked behind my wall
Any worse I think I could do it
End it all
Bust down the wall
Set myself free from myself
Taking the knife pressing down, pulling back
A pain that I feel is wonderful
A pain I have never felt before
A pain that relieves all
Tears rolling down my face
I never wanted to do this
I never wanted to end it this way
I'm here alone without you
Fighting through this alone
Cutting deeper and deeper
Watching myself fall slowly
I wrote our names in my blood
I seen your smiling face just before I blacked out

[comments] => 2 [counter] => 173 [topic] => 36 [informant] => stonedraider23 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 6 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )

Feeling down

Contributed by stonedraider23 on Friday, 21st January 2005 @ 05:21:35 AM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

Depressed
Feeling down
Tears begging to pour
Heart throbbing ready to burst
My mind tossing and turning
Wanting a way out
Needing to find a way out
Trapped inside
Locked behind my wall
Any worse I think I could do it
End it all
Bust down the wall
Set myself free from myself
Taking the knife pressing down, pulling back
A pain that I feel is wonderful
A pain I have never felt before
A pain that relieves all
Tears rolling down my face
I never wanted to do this
I never wanted to end it this way
I'm here alone without you
Fighting through this alone
Cutting deeper and deeper
Watching myself fall slowly
I wrote our names in my blood
I seen your smiling face just before I blacked out

Copyright © stonedraider23 ... [ 2005-01-21 05:21:35]
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Re: Feeling down (User Rating: 1 )
by autumngreeneyes on Friday, 21st January 2005 @ 12:31:25 PM AEST
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I saw your face..not I seen your face..

Re: Feeling down (User Rating: 1 )
by savedbydeath on Monday, 24th January 2005 @ 08:11:36 PM AEST
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aww,ur not fighting this alone hun,we're all around u trying to help u,just open up ur pretty eyes and let urself realize,love ya,good write

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