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The super market seems empty tonight

The fluorescents flicker never a constant light
The frozen food aisle is cold
The pre packaged convenience food's make me lonely tonight
Every TV diner packaged in a perfect mold

Were closing in 5 minutes announces the microphone
Please bring your purchase to register 3
I probably should go home but that is not were i want to be

At the register 3 a man pays and storms out the door
$29.50 for a dozen of stem cut flowers
At least he has someone to buy them for
I have this grocery store to wandering for hours
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Ode de spermarket

Contributed by jace on Friday, 21st January 2005 @ 12:06:16 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

Lonesome I wander the aisles
The super market seems empty tonight

The fluorescents flicker never a constant light
The frozen food aisle is cold
The pre packaged convenience food's make me lonely tonight
Every TV diner packaged in a perfect mold

Were closing in 5 minutes announces the microphone
Please bring your purchase to register 3
I probably should go home but that is not were i want to be

At the register 3 a man pays and storms out the door
$29.50 for a dozen of stem cut flowers
At least he has someone to buy them for
I have this grocery store to wandering for hours

Copyright © jace ... [ 2005-01-21 12:06:16]
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Re: Ode de spermarket (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 21st January 2005 @ 12:11:04 PM AEST
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Yeah, some people have trouble counting their blessings. This is a touching story. Blessings.

Re: Ode de spermarket (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Friday, 21st January 2005 @ 03:16:27 PM AEST
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Im feeling this great expression
Michelle

Re: Ode de spermarket (User Rating: 1 )
by Spike on Saturday, 22nd January 2005 @ 04:39:20 AM AEST
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And if libraries and art galleries were open late, they'd be packed too. There are a lot of lonely hearts out there, including mine, sometimes. Nice write.

Spike

Re: Ode de spermarket (User Rating: 1 )
by Beniam on Saturday, 19th February 2005 @ 07:58:05 PM AEST
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Jace, very well done. I think this is my fav of your work.

Beniam

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