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Walking hand in hand, down by the sea
Of course by then, many months would’ve passed
I’m curious to know, how long we could last
Curious I am, but a cat I am not
In case you wanted to add, your little remark
Taking a chance, yes that’s what I’m doing
But only for now, without all the screwing
Actions of course, speak louder than words
So we’ll see what happens, as the world turns
Usually when I speak to you, I can honestly say
That my troubles and worries, have gone for the day
That’s quite impressive, if you had asked me
So let’s see just how special, you turn out to be
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Can't Wait

Contributed by o7neves on Saturday, 22nd January 2005 @ 08:07:21 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

Ahh, it is you whom I can’t wait to see
Walking hand in hand, down by the sea
Of course by then, many months would’ve passed
I’m curious to know, how long we could last
Curious I am, but a cat I am not
In case you wanted to add, your little remark
Taking a chance, yes that’s what I’m doing
But only for now, without all the screwing
Actions of course, speak louder than words
So we’ll see what happens, as the world turns
Usually when I speak to you, I can honestly say
That my troubles and worries, have gone for the day
That’s quite impressive, if you had asked me
So let’s see just how special, you turn out to be

Copyright Â© o7neves ... [ 2005-01-22 20:07:21]
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Re: Can't Wait (User Rating: 1 )
by TheVoice on Saturday, 22nd January 2005 @ 09:04:23 PM AEST
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very nice write. right to the point.

The Voice

Re: Can't Wait (User Rating: 1 )
by CurtisC on Saturday, 22nd January 2005 @ 09:39:01 PM AEST
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Great job, I hope he turns out to be more special then you've ever imagined....

Curtis

Re: Can't Wait (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 22nd January 2005 @ 10:17:17 PM AEST
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Sweet write...sounds like fun. I'm curious too, but we're not so sure about the cat part...

Re: Can't Wait (User Rating: 1 )
by Dec2three198five on Sunday, 23rd January 2005 @ 04:14:45 AM AEST
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I like this one. has a great flow and the words and whole poem i understood except for the Cat part. lol. 33

Re: Can't Wait (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 04:10:08 PM AEST
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Very heartfelt. I enjoyed readin this. Great work.

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