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The blood drips down
The stem of thorns
As you're crucified
By the carved words
Upon your heart
Of stone

The blood drips down
The cross of death
And taints it
Till your last breath

The thorns that adorn
Your head
Hold the white rose
That dies slowly
With each passing day
That you're still alive

It slowly dies
As the blood drips down
The stem of thorns
From the black rose
Of death

And the petals fall
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Crucified

Contributed by essentially9 on Saturday, 22nd January 2005 @ 09:51:52 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Crucified

The blood drips down
The stem of thorns
As you're crucified
By the carved words
Upon your heart
Of stone

The blood drips down
The cross of death
And taints it
Till your last breath

The thorns that adorn
Your head
Hold the white rose
That dies slowly
With each passing day
That you're still alive

It slowly dies
As the blood drips down
The stem of thorns
From the black rose
Of death

And the petals fall
With your last breath

Copyright © essentially9 ... [ 2005-01-22 21:51:52]
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Re: Crucified (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Saturday, 22nd January 2005 @ 09:58:47 PM AEST
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gave me a shiver with this one great undertones to this piece
Michelle

Re: Crucified (User Rating: 1 )
by Katie2008 on Saturday, 22nd January 2005 @ 10:02:40 PM AEST
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This was amazing. I loved the last line.

Re: Crucified (User Rating: 1 )
by afterdark on Saturday, 22nd January 2005 @ 10:06:52 PM AEST
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Your bloody amazing..In a heat beat I would publish you if I could..Your on top here..

Re: Crucified (User Rating: 1 )
by faith_my_eyes on Saturday, 22nd January 2005 @ 10:12:25 PM AEST
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incredible imagery, as always.

Re: Crucified (User Rating: 1 )
by ForeverAlone on Saturday, 22nd January 2005 @ 10:33:49 PM AEST
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You always amaze me with your ability with words.

Re: Crucified (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 22nd January 2005 @ 10:41:22 PM AEST
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This is so awesome. Amazing imagery. Great job.

Re: Crucified (User Rating: 1 )
by Spazzo on Saturday, 22nd January 2005 @ 10:41:55 PM AEST
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This is awesome. Very awesome.

Spazzo

Re: Crucified (User Rating: 1 )
by waos on Sunday, 23rd January 2005 @ 12:31:00 AM AEST
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Wow that was really good, what a picture, what feeling... it's amazing what simple words strung together can produce.

Nice!
~Waos/Kara

Re: Crucified (User Rating: 1 )
by Vampirequeen on Sunday, 23rd January 2005 @ 04:01:32 AM AEST
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Amazing is right.awsome

Re: Crucified (User Rating: 1 )
by Willofree on Sunday, 23rd January 2005 @ 04:49:53 PM AEST
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Impressive write, and great imagery. Powerful ending

Willofree

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