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Array ( [sid] => 81210 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => without you... [time] => 2005-01-24 02:32:49 [hometext] => letting my heart empty in writing tonight as memoies flood me, [bodytext] => froze still lost in those eyes
hold me as my eyes cry
living alone yet living a lie
need you to hold me tight
loved you from hello,
loved you when i let go,
needed you to love me
but i wasn't meant to be,

gave you my heart
from the very start
gave you all my love,
now you watch me from above
tonight i cry for you
tonight my heart is blue

if i could touch you one last time
it would give my life a reason
but without you i've lost all understanding
and still my love is unending,
but my heart is still mending

if you could hold me one last time
would it hurt me too much to let you go,
if you could be hear tonight
i'd never let you go,
but i stood by your side this day two long years ago,
and listened to the doctor say, "HE'LL NEVER WAKE UP,
and with those words my heart shattered,
my life was turned upside down,
now all thats left is me and my memory,

the day i got the call
my heart wouldn't beat,
i was like rubber
couldn't feel my feet,
i felt my life slip away,
i looked at you lying lifeless in that hospital bed,
how did I know in 8 days you would be dead
i said i'd miss you forever,
and ever time its been true,
but somehow I managed to pull thru
2 lonely years without you... [comments] => 3 [counter] => 168 [topic] => 39 [informant] => brokenwings [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Grief )

without you...

Contributed by brokenwings on Monday, 24th January 2005 @ 02:32:49 AM in AEST
Topic: Grief

froze still lost in those eyes
hold me as my eyes cry
living alone yet living a lie
need you to hold me tight
loved you from hello,
loved you when i let go,
needed you to love me
but i wasn't meant to be,

gave you my heart
from the very start
gave you all my love,
now you watch me from above
tonight i cry for you
tonight my heart is blue

if i could touch you one last time
it would give my life a reason
but without you i've lost all understanding
and still my love is unending,
but my heart is still mending

if you could hold me one last time
would it hurt me too much to let you go,
if you could be hear tonight
i'd never let you go,
but i stood by your side this day two long years ago,
and listened to the doctor say, "HE'LL NEVER WAKE UP,
and with those words my heart shattered,
my life was turned upside down,
now all thats left is me and my memory,

the day i got the call
my heart wouldn't beat,
i was like rubber
couldn't feel my feet,
i felt my life slip away,
i looked at you lying lifeless in that hospital bed,
how did I know in 8 days you would be dead
i said i'd miss you forever,
and ever time its been true,
but somehow I managed to pull thru
2 lonely years without you...

Copyright © brokenwings ... [ 2005-01-24 02:32:49]
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Re: without you... (User Rating: 1 )
by pUnKa_RaCh on Monday, 24th January 2005 @ 02:52:57 AM AEST
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awww this is very sad but such a beautiful write and i can relate to what such a tragic loss can feel like, even though the ones ive lost i havent been that close to. but i am truly sorry for ur lose.....thanku for sharing

Re: without you... (User Rating: 1 )
by blowfish_jane on Monday, 24th January 2005 @ 02:56:58 AM AEST
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aww this is so sad, yet its so writen well.
Im speechless on how emotional it is, you've done a great job on this.

Jane x

Re: without you... (User Rating: 1 )
by Stonedraider23 on Monday, 24th January 2005 @ 04:54:32 AM AEST
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wow great write i liked alot i lost soneone close but they died instantly i was told i'd never wake up again after my car wreck but i did 2 days later i was just lucky sorry 4 ur loss

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