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Array ( [sid] => 81401 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => How are you doing? [time] => 2005-01-25 11:50:01 [hometext] => Out of everything I've ever written this was the only thing never intended to be a poem. I seriously just wrote it when my friend asked how I was doing and I thought it was really expressive and i'm sure people can relate...So here it is... [bodytext] => When asked how I was doing this was my only answer...

Besides having my insides feel like a big empty whole,
well my entire body feels like it's ice cold,
and theres no release for the screams and pains I want to let go,
and there's nothing ever to do and nowhere to go,
Being incredibly short on cash to the point that I can barely live paycheck to paycheck,
and everytime I want to have someone to lean on,
their shoulder has grown hard and doesn't comfort me the way it used to,
sleep cannot console because lately it never even comes,
and I can't stand to look at my own reflection for the meer fact that it proves I'm still alive...
besides all that... ok i guess [comments] => 2 [counter] => 239 [topic] => 63 [informant] => cOld [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => hbadday )

How are you doing?

Contributed by cOld on Tuesday, 25th January 2005 @ 11:50:01 AM in AEST
Topic: hbadday

When asked how I was doing this was my only answer...

Besides having my insides feel like a big empty whole,
well my entire body feels like it's ice cold,
and theres no release for the screams and pains I want to let go,
and there's nothing ever to do and nowhere to go,
Being incredibly short on cash to the point that I can barely live paycheck to paycheck,
and everytime I want to have someone to lean on,
their shoulder has grown hard and doesn't comfort me the way it used to,
sleep cannot console because lately it never even comes,
and I can't stand to look at my own reflection for the meer fact that it proves I'm still alive...
besides all that... ok i guess

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Re: How are you doing? (User Rating: 1 )
by WorthlesSanity666 on Tuesday, 25th January 2005 @ 12:20:03 PM AEST
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That's usually my response to people too. I'm sorry you doing so horrid. I really liked the ending. Wishing well.
--Felix The Great

Re: How are you doing? (User Rating: 1 )
by dark_descent on Tuesday, 25th January 2005 @ 01:12:57 PM AEST
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its very clever I like it a lot. The ending is just perfect!

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