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thats where I will be
struggling for life
dying to be me

I'm residing there
looking through your eyes
I need that world,
the world I see through your stare

Locked in your trance
adjust my sight
put me into focus
I need this my love
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through your eyes

Contributed by sweetoccasion29 on Tuesday, 25th January 2005 @ 05:44:53 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

Enclosed in your mind
thats where I will be
struggling for life
dying to be me

I'm residing there
looking through your eyes
I need that world,
the world I see through your stare

Locked in your trance
adjust my sight
put me into focus
I need this my love
I need this chance.

Copyright © sweetoccasion29 ... [ 2005-01-25 17:44:53]
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Re: through your eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by ElatedNBliss on Tuesday, 25th January 2005 @ 05:45:55 PM AEST
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nice write

Re: through your eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by waitingintheshadows on Tuesday, 25th January 2005 @ 05:47:22 PM AEST
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beautiful poem....

Re: through your eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by zenmind on Tuesday, 25th January 2005 @ 06:00:09 PM AEST
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Buddha said, "Be a lamp unto yourself"

I am reminded of that scene in the Matrix Reloaded, when Neo goes to Zion, and that kid runs up to him saying, "Neo, you saved me. Thank You" and Neo said, "You saved yourself kid"

I think we all try to grasp onto people to give our life meaning, but I think in order to find real lasting happiness we need to find that happiness and contentment within ourselves. I don't know you or your situation, so this might not apply to this poem, but what you wrote reminded me of that.

Be True,
zenmind

Re: through your eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 25th January 2005 @ 06:15:58 PM AEST
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Beautiful poem,and welcome to ypdc, I greet you with open arms.

Re: through your eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by afterdark on Wednesday, 26th January 2005 @ 09:09:35 AM AEST
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Good write..I feel there could have been more but that may be due to my mood this morning..I liked how you began it and how you ended it also..In the future we will see what else you can do.

Re: through your eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by Sinned on Monday, 4th April 2005 @ 08:29:33 PM AEST
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sweetoccasions29

Interesting write I'm still trying to understand the whole meaning.

Sinned

Re: through your eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Saturday, 30th April 2005 @ 07:15:31 PM AEST
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beautiful, romantic and loving... hugs n' love nessa

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