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Questioning
Contributed by
cuddlytiger17
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Tuesday, 25th January 2005 @ 08:44:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Too many emotions
Spinning through my mind
A whirlwind of afterthoughts
So loosely defined
Stay, Believe, and Return
Simple words these may seem
But my actions fail to be
Equivalent in their simplicity
And as confusion overpowers
Taking its known route,
These words begin to form
Leaking their own doubts
So as Im gasping for air
Barely grasping reality
Know Im stumbling about
Questioning your validity
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cuddlytiger17
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2005-01-25 20:44:00]
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Re: Questioning
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by Live2Die on
Tuesday, 25th January 2005 @ 09:20:54 PM AEST
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| Great Write, I can really relate. |
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Re: Questioning
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by the_Ghost_Moth on
Tuesday, 25th January 2005 @ 10:47:50 PM AEST
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The rhythm really helps convey
delerium.
Good thinking, Anna Marie.
--Ghosty |
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Re: Questioning
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 26th January 2005 @ 12:15:30 AM AEST
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| Excellant write. So relatable to so many people.. |
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Re: Questioning
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by Cynthia on
Sunday, 20th February 2005 @ 09:48:05 PM AEST
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| I know exactly how you feel. It's hard to beleive anything anybody says. Great write. *S* Cynthia |
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