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Array ( [sid] => 81496 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Alone [time] => 2005-01-25 21:21:24 [hometext] => I thought of some of it on my way to class, so I just wrote all of it in class [bodytext] => A dark room
A locked door
A shut window
A broken heart
Just me

In my solitude I can sit and wonder:
What went wrong?

My first turn at the game went well.
But miles pulled us apart.
There was so much alike.
But the time just didn't coincide.

My second turn at the game made me think I was done playing.
But there was nothing there.
It seemed that I was the only one pulling things along.
That with the other I would be held back.
They wanted ultimate power but I would rather be a partener than a slave.
So much seemed to go wrong.
But this one I just can't forget.

I am waiting for my next turn at the game.
Maybe to put it all together,
Then I could move to the next stage.
I just can't go through time alone.
I don't want to brave the world with no one at my side.
I don't think I could stand on my own.

When I think of the past I know that I have learned so much.
But when I try to imagine a future I only see an empty page.
In only one dream did the one who loved me have a face.
But that only existed in the dream.

A darkened room
An unlocked door
A cracked window
A guarded heart
Just me [comments] => 2 [counter] => 180 [topic] => 22 [informant] => DragonLuvSong [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )
Alone

Contributed by DragonLuvSong on Tuesday, 25th January 2005 @ 09:21:24 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



A dark room
A locked door
A shut window
A broken heart
Just me

In my solitude I can sit and wonder:
What went wrong?

My first turn at the game went well.
But miles pulled us apart.
There was so much alike.
But the time just didn't coincide.

My second turn at the game made me think I was done playing.
But there was nothing there.
It seemed that I was the only one pulling things along.
That with the other I would be held back.
They wanted ultimate power but I would rather be a partener than a slave.
So much seemed to go wrong.
But this one I just can't forget.

I am waiting for my next turn at the game.
Maybe to put it all together,
Then I could move to the next stage.
I just can't go through time alone.
I don't want to brave the world with no one at my side.
I don't think I could stand on my own.

When I think of the past I know that I have learned so much.
But when I try to imagine a future I only see an empty page.
In only one dream did the one who loved me have a face.
But that only existed in the dream.

A darkened room
An unlocked door
A cracked window
A guarded heart
Just me




Copyright © DragonLuvSong ... [ 2005-01-25 21:21:24]
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Re: Alone (User Rating: 1 )
by OnAngelswings on Tuesday, 25th January 2005 @ 09:45:20 PM AEST
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Very nicely said...I hope you someday find what your looking for and it lasts forever...just never give up....Shari


Re: Alone (User Rating: 1 )
by jjones12 on Wednesday, 26th January 2005 @ 12:10:48 AM AEST
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Great write!

=Jen=




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