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You called my name
Contributed by
bibi
on
Tuesday, 25th January 2005 @ 11:20:23 PM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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I heard you call my name last night
I wondered where you had been
It did not seem to matter
because here you was again
So many things I had to say
I could not even speak
As if you felt my aching heart
you bent and kissed my cheek
An overwhelming sense of calm
began to fill my soul
From all the months of holding back
emotions overflowed
You held me close and let me cry
then soon I fell asleep
I knew that even though you're gone
this love will always be
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2005-01-25 23:20:23]
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Re: You called my name
(User Rating: 1 )
by Xxluckie_lynnxX on
Wednesday, 26th January 2005 @ 04:47:17 PM AEST
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awe .. this is really good .. short and sweet .. the words flowed and the message was clear .. was this to somebody who pased away ? or broken up ? well whoever it was .. its very very good .. i cant believe nobody commented yet .. !
keep writing
Love to you -
~*~ Luckie Lynn ~*~ |
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