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Aren’t we all little puppets ?
Or dolls to put on a show ?
We say our lines and act or feelings
And then we’re lost in ourselves real low

We blame each other
What’s the reason for this ?
Our human body is not perfect
Our soul will never be full of bliss

Somebody up there is pulling our strings
And waiting for us to realize
That it only takes one mind,
One single person to believe the lies

We’ve been told for so long
That this is what life should be
But what do we know about anything ?
We are too blind to see

We need to cut the strings and let loose
See the brilliant sun
To dance, laugh, and sing
The is how it should be done

But we are scared to end the power
We don’t want to make decisions ourselves
We wait on others and blame them
When we do something else

What is we all were little dancers
In a Vegas show ?
We don’t really know what’s going on
And it’s time everybody should know .
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Puppets

Contributed by Xxluckie_lynnxX on Wednesday, 26th January 2005 @ 07:22:47 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems



Puppets

Aren’t we all little puppets ?
Or dolls to put on a show ?
We say our lines and act or feelings
And then we’re lost in ourselves real low

We blame each other
What’s the reason for this ?
Our human body is not perfect
Our soul will never be full of bliss

Somebody up there is pulling our strings
And waiting for us to realize
That it only takes one mind,
One single person to believe the lies

We’ve been told for so long
That this is what life should be
But what do we know about anything ?
We are too blind to see

We need to cut the strings and let loose
See the brilliant sun
To dance, laugh, and sing
The is how it should be done

But we are scared to end the power
We don’t want to make decisions ourselves
We wait on others and blame them
When we do something else

What is we all were little dancers
In a Vegas show ?
We don’t really know what’s going on
And it’s time everybody should know .




Copyright © Xxluckie_lynnxX ... [ 2005-01-26 19:22:47]
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Re: Puppets (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 26th January 2005 @ 07:40:52 PM AEST
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This could have been more profound, but I'm willing to overlook it on accord with your mercy plea.

Hope you don't become a puppet in the time that you're away .. .

N_F
(trying to be affectionate)


Re: Puppets (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 26th January 2005 @ 09:02:22 PM AEST
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(Gee Nep - if one gets that kind of response from you by pleading, I think I'll put that on all of mine! :-) )

Hey LL - have you tried Sims Online? (Warning - addictive!) Anyway, your concept here is a good one and you're right, we do look to blame someone in large part. Nice Write! Cheers!


Re: Puppets (User Rating: 1 )
by XOashleyreneXO on Saturday, 29th January 2005 @ 06:54:00 PM AEST
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love it like always! you really did say we all felt like that and i knew you were right!
Love you lotz!
ashley*rene'




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