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SultryRose's Signatures

Writing so natural to me.
Long thru my bloodline
ran free. My gift on loan
from God. Breaking new
ground on this sod.

With this gift comes
all sortta things.
Maybe joy, patience,
endurance or pain.
With this comes all sortta
things. Songs can make
you cry or sing.

Not much money comes
this way but God takes
care of me, hey. He
gives me will to
choose to hurt, cry,
luv, or abuse.

Either way our choice
see? Make up or to
be bound or free.
Jus pick up my pen,
tune into vibs. God's
luv keeps me alive.

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WITH THIS GIFT COMES

Contributed by emystar on Thursday, 27th January 2005 @ 06:05:26 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

SultryRose's Signatures

Writing so natural to me.
Long thru my bloodline
ran free. My gift on loan
from God. Breaking new
ground on this sod.

With this gift comes
all sortta things.
Maybe joy, patience,
endurance or pain.
With this comes all sortta
things. Songs can make
you cry or sing.

Not much money comes
this way but God takes
care of me, hey. He
gives me will to
choose to hurt, cry,
luv, or abuse.

Either way our choice
see? Make up or to
be bound or free.
Jus pick up my pen,
tune into vibs. God's
luv keeps me alive.

Copyright © emystar ... [ 2005-01-27 06:05:26]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: WITH THIS GIFT COMES (User Rating: 1 )
by autumngreeneyes on Thursday, 27th January 2005 @ 06:17:17 AM AEST
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really cool Emy.. funny how writing works..when it comes..it just comes..

Re: WITH THIS GIFT COMES (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Thursday, 27th January 2005 @ 06:35:34 AM AEST
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Excellent perspective grrlfriend.....
Keep on using this gift..
Hugs
Jenni

Re: WITH THIS GIFT COMES (User Rating: 1 )
by blowfish_jane on Thursday, 27th January 2005 @ 08:36:33 AM AEST
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Emy this is wonderfull, a very nicely done poem.
Nice write.

Jane x

Re: WITH THIS GIFT COMES (User Rating: 1 )
by Rakerman1999 on Thursday, 27th January 2005 @ 08:43:08 AM AEST
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Beautiful Emy...
Very well done
Roses
Larry

Re: WITH THIS GIFT COMES (User Rating: 1 )
by sweetangeluk on Thursday, 27th January 2005 @ 08:56:00 AM AEST
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Go with the grace of God Emmy. Wonderful poem.

Love Sweetangelukxxxx

Re: WITH THIS GIFT COMES (User Rating: 1 )
by lostinmyself on Thursday, 27th January 2005 @ 10:23:09 AM AEST
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Awww. This is lovely.
A beautiful write.
Never waste your gift, K?

*hugs* Phil xxx

Re: WITH THIS GIFT COMES (User Rating: 1 )
by DorianChambers on Thursday, 27th January 2005 @ 03:18:48 PM AEST
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verry nice writting, ty 4 sharing the gift that keeps on giving . . .

Dorian Chambers

Re: WITH THIS GIFT COMES (User Rating: 1 )
by Fionndruinne on Thursday, 27th January 2005 @ 05:49:33 PM AEST
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Isn't this the truth. Nicely done, and a great subject.

Take care.

Andrew

Re: WITH THIS GIFT COMES (User Rating: 1 )
by Spazzo on Thursday, 27th January 2005 @ 08:43:25 PM AEST
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Wow! This is beautiful!

Spazzo

Re: WITH THIS GIFT COMES (User Rating: 1 )
by Willofree on Friday, 28th January 2005 @ 05:43:09 PM AEST
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You certainly do have the gift. I felt moved by the fact that you give God the credit for your talent. I would certainly agree. It's good to see you make such good use of your talent.

You may not get rich, but this poem is full of richness. A wonderful write.
Willofree

Re: WITH THIS GIFT COMES (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Saturday, 29th January 2005 @ 06:26:26 AM AEST
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Excellent writing my dear friend..hugs:-) venkat

Re: WITH THIS GIFT COMES (User Rating: 1 )
by Tanmaya on Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 08:53:14 AM AEST
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Very sincere and heart-warming.
Honest words- that have humility and the deep joy that come from knowing God's your provider, and He's all you need.

Well-done!

Re: WITH THIS GIFT COMES (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 25th February 2005 @ 01:21:16 AM AEST
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Another beautiful, inspiring write. The music fits perfectly and that picture is simply gorgeous. Written to perfection.

Take Care
-Becca

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