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Array ( [sid] => 81743 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => untitled [time] => 2005-01-27 15:39:06 [hometext] => [bodytext] => down your face
trickles one black tear.
behind your eyes
there's nothing but fear.

why is it now,
that you choose to care?
at my wrist i continue
to tear.

tracing the razor
with my own blood.
down my wrist,
there's a raging flood.

frowing in the mirror
is where i stand
i feel the warm blood
fall off my hand.

glass in my face
as the mirror breaks.
voices all around me,
as i awake.

look into my eyes
that hold so much hate.
i cant decide what's
real and what's fake.

so hold me down with
your wicked stares.
i know that someday
i'll meet you there. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 141 [topic] => 6 [informant] => waitingintheshadows [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )
untitled

Contributed by waitingintheshadows on Thursday, 27th January 2005 @ 03:39:06 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry



down your face
trickles one black tear.
behind your eyes
there's nothing but fear.

why is it now,
that you choose to care?
at my wrist i continue
to tear.

tracing the razor
with my own blood.
down my wrist,
there's a raging flood.

frowing in the mirror
is where i stand
i feel the warm blood
fall off my hand.

glass in my face
as the mirror breaks.
voices all around me,
as i awake.

look into my eyes
that hold so much hate.
i cant decide what's
real and what's fake.

so hold me down with
your wicked stares.
i know that someday
i'll meet you there.




Copyright © waitingintheshadows ... [ 2005-01-27 15:39:06]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: untitled (User Rating: 1 )
by afterdark on Thursday, 27th January 2005 @ 04:12:54 PM AEST
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I would have liked it better if it had a title..That bothers me to no end when i See these post's that have no title..Other then that it read very well..A bit overdone in some areas but the subject is one that has been done a million times over.


Re: untitled (User Rating: 1 )
by darkangeleyes57 on Friday, 24th March 2006 @ 12:20:28 PM AEST
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Too bad there was no title.. I liked this though it was really good.. been there..

take care
christina




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