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Array ( [sid] => 81786 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Brightest Star Shines On You [time] => 2005-01-27 19:34:14 [hometext] => to someone dear to me [bodytext] => Cant believe what you did to me. Like a rainbow after the storm you lifted my spirit so high. With all that has been given to me still you rise above the rest as your glow melts all the ice around me. Sunflower fields on the brightest day could not be compared with your beauty. Right now i cant see you but like the wind i can certainly feel you. You have touched me like noone else. With you I can promise no pulp just like you prefere. Your truly one of a kind and i would love to draw every heart from your deck. Now when i go to bed every night i think of you and i see the sun shine every time i wake. Always reminding me of the warmth you can give.

Perhaps one day we can be more. Some can give you everything you could ever want but if you open your doors to me i can give you warmth of the heart, life of the soul, and fill your spirit everyday with fascination. It will go forever as when hearts connect the chain cannot be broken. Many reasons can be attributed to these feelings but the greatest of all is simply you!

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The Brightest Star Shines On You

Contributed by raven on Thursday, 27th January 2005 @ 07:34:14 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



Cant believe what you did to me. Like a rainbow after the storm you lifted my spirit so high. With all that has been given to me still you rise above the rest as your glow melts all the ice around me. Sunflower fields on the brightest day could not be compared with your beauty. Right now i cant see you but like the wind i can certainly feel you. You have touched me like noone else. With you I can promise no pulp just like you prefere. Your truly one of a kind and i would love to draw every heart from your deck. Now when i go to bed every night i think of you and i see the sun shine every time i wake. Always reminding me of the warmth you can give.

Perhaps one day we can be more. Some can give you everything you could ever want but if you open your doors to me i can give you warmth of the heart, life of the soul, and fill your spirit everyday with fascination. It will go forever as when hearts connect the chain cannot be broken. Many reasons can be attributed to these feelings but the greatest of all is simply you!





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Re: The Brightest Star Shines On You (User Rating: 1 )
by afterdark on Thursday, 27th January 2005 @ 07:37:18 PM AEST
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Very good..Not the type I tend to read but yours have been very good often then not..No exception here.


Re: The Brightest Star Shines On You (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Thursday, 27th January 2005 @ 09:32:15 PM AEST
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Wow someone is very lucky. This is a heavenly beautifull masterpeice that can move any one's soul that reads.
heavely.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy


Re: The Brightest Star Shines On You (User Rating: 1 )
by CurtisC on Thursday, 27th January 2005 @ 10:17:11 PM AEST
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this was beautiful, I know exactly how you feel :)

Curtis


Re: The Brightest Star Shines On You (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 28th January 2005 @ 12:57:30 AM AEST
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Sweet, romantic and hopeful. Beautiful. Keep writing. Cheers!


Re: The Brightest Star Shines On You (User Rating: 1 )
by DorianChambers on Friday, 28th January 2005 @ 06:37:13 PM AEST
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u know i hate 2 call some of these writtings poems, so i won't do that with this one cause it goes deeper, it's u and what u feel, and what your feeling is beautiful, no this ain't a poem, it's the thruth of what should be written more of, it's love in it's purest form, r u a good writer? who the hell am i 2 say, did i enjoy reading this, yes very much so.

Dorian Chambers




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