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Moon Ring
Contributed by
luinil
on
Thursday, 27th January 2005 @ 08:18:34 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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ring around the moon
rain to follow soon
wash away my blood
loose unbidden flood
shadow hug the ground
silence crashing sound
meekly face the wall
fear who walks the hall
shiver when you wished it
wickedly untwisted
tongue impale the sun
evil this way run
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2005-01-27 20:18:34]
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Re: Moon Ring
(User Rating: 1 )
by afterdark on
Thursday, 27th January 2005 @ 08:23:56 PM AEST
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| Not very dark at all.But to each his own I guess..Could have been more broad here as well..Not sure if it was tohave been darker but definitly could have been much darker for my taste. |
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Re: Moon Ring
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by Essentially9 on
Thursday, 27th January 2005 @ 11:14:48 PM AEST
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| i thought i was the only one that knew about the ring around the moon thing... excellent write. dark is opinion. but i loved your poem. |
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