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Running Away
Contributed by
ForeverAlone
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Friday, 28th January 2005 @ 08:44:45 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Look at all the promises you've broken
Never took the time to understand
I'm tired of all the bull**** you've spoken
I wanna remove my existence from this land
Feel these wounds you've opened
This pain I can't stand
I dont know how I've been Cope'in
I could'nt stand it any longer
So I ran
Hopeing
To get lost
Running anywhere
At any cost
Through the cold
And the frost
But no matter where I went
I was never lost
I knew the way
And to this day
I'm still running
Running Away
Copyright ©
ForeverAlone
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2005-01-28 20:44:45]
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Re: Running Away
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by ForeverAlone on
Friday, 28th January 2005 @ 08:46:30 PM AEST
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| Sorry for the Double post how do I get rid of one of these |
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Re: Running Away
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by Livingfaith143 on
Friday, 28th January 2005 @ 08:54:51 PM AEST
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| I dont think you can unpost a post. But its ok. I loved your poem. I can relate. I have lots of running away poems. keep up the good writing. Jenn |
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Re: Running Away
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by TheNextRobertFrost on
Friday, 28th January 2005 @ 08:58:32 PM AEST
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Hi. I liked this poem very much. I think there are many times id like to go to my own privet planet or sumthin an get away from the world. Very touching!
Best hopes for you poetry
T.A.B |
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Re: Running Away
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by Essentially9 on
Saturday, 29th January 2005 @ 12:45:33 AM AEST
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| fantastic poem. id like this better without all the spaces though. the space tends to annoy me thinking there is emptiness in the poem (meaning lack of anything) i tried running. got blisters. i couldnt leave my mind... |
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Re: Running Away
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by Nonefound on
Wednesday, 4th May 2011 @ 06:03:13 PM AEST
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| That is well written with a lot of thought. Some time when you are running you find something else, or maybe your self. Like it. |
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