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Hanging by iron nails
With punctured vessels
Showing how frail
You are in these thistles

The adorned thorns fixated
By the ones that hated
With passion that was sated

The nails have tasted
The blood that's desecrated
By the sin to still be created

The lies that are decorated
By the truth that's serrated
With passion to be berated

Blood dripping
Entwined with sweat
The sun is setting
With death to tears wept

You hung a martyr
As a liar and a father
You are the antichrist
And death won't suffice

With your promises unkept
And all of the sins left
Death to those who wept
And forgive and forget

Who you really are
The one that fails
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Antichrist

Contributed by essentially9 on Friday, 28th January 2005 @ 11:47:30 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Antichrist

Hanging by iron nails
With punctured vessels
Showing how frail
You are in these thistles

The adorned thorns fixated
By the ones that hated
With passion that was sated

The nails have tasted
The blood that's desecrated
By the sin to still be created

The lies that are decorated
By the truth that's serrated
With passion to be berated

Blood dripping
Entwined with sweat
The sun is setting
With death to tears wept

You hung a martyr
As a liar and a father
You are the antichrist
And death won't suffice

With your promises unkept
And all of the sins left
Death to those who wept
And forgive and forget

Who you really are
The one that fails
Us all

Copyright © essentially9 ... [ 2005-01-28 23:47:30]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Antichrist (User Rating: 1 )
by jjones12 on Friday, 28th January 2005 @ 11:50:06 PM AEST
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Bull *****!!!

Re: Antichrist (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Saturday, 29th January 2005 @ 12:30:23 AM AEST
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though I am not antichrist...I can say this is a marvellous write :-) venkat

Re: Antichrist (User Rating: 1 )
by ForeverAlone on Saturday, 29th January 2005 @ 12:35:19 AM AEST
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I love this one.

Re: Antichrist (User Rating: 1 )
by Vampirequeen on Saturday, 29th January 2005 @ 01:46:37 AM AEST
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interesting bit of writing .

Re: Antichrist (User Rating: 1 )
by afterdark on Saturday, 29th January 2005 @ 09:47:17 AM AEST
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Perhaps only one or two others here could have pulled this off..But most here care to much about bad comments..Course you know I do not..Your amazing here as always..This poem is bloody awesome..

With your promises unkept
And all of the sins left
Death to those who wept
And forgive and forget

Who you really are
The one that fails
Us all

That is great right there..If I have my choice you can be my AntiChrist..Besides it better to rule in Hell then serve in Heaven..

Re: Antichrist (User Rating: 1 )
by Stitch on Saturday, 29th January 2005 @ 10:16:52 AM AEST
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I honestly can't tell from this which side you are on.
Stitch

Re: Antichrist (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 29th January 2005 @ 02:59:50 PM AEST
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We don't always have to agree with the content to recognize a well done poem!
and this is well done!

Re: Antichrist (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Saturday, 29th January 2005 @ 11:08:14 PM AEST
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I am going to be honest when I first read this
poem I was angry, but now I am sad... I am
sad because I realize that you and many
others are lost. You have bought in to the lies
of this world and have decided to blame it on
Jesus (or God whatever you prefer). Jesus'
death saved me and countless others and
you can be saved as well if you choose to. In
this you have sought to cheapen his ultimate
sacrifice, but nothing you say or anyone else
says can cheapen what he did or negate his
love for YOU and everyone else that he died
for. I hope you see that soon and I hope you
see the one that failed us is satan.

Bobo (Joel)

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