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In the beginning it was all perfect.
All smiles and hugs.
But there was more.
Things my family and friends have seen.
You changed me.
Yet I refused to agree.

Where did it all go wrong?
It wasn’t me and I wasn’t at fault.
Neither were you.
This is why I am confused.

My friends had seen what I refused to.
They told me they knew what you do.
That I should not pay when you’re upset.
That you were hurting me emotionally.
That I had to put an end to it.
But, I did not listen to that.
I want to pretend it would be o.k.

My family trusted you.
When you where the problem.
You convinced the teachers and counselors,
That I was the bad guy.
When I walked in the room.
All eyes are on me.
Things used to be different.
Going class to class with a group of friends.
Something I never thought would end.
But you changed that and it hurt.
You know my friends are everything.

I sat there and watched my life change.
It was spinning out of control.
I don’t want to leave.
I really don’t but I can’t let
It stay the same.

It’s not going to be easy,
But something must be done.
You changed me.
I can’t change you.
But, never forget
I love you.
Good bye
My love
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You changed me.

Contributed by moon_light on Saturday, 29th January 2005 @ 12:31:25 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

In the beginning it was all perfect.
All smiles and hugs.
But there was more.
Things my family and friends have seen.
You changed me.
Yet I refused to agree.

Where did it all go wrong?
It wasn’t me and I wasn’t at fault.
Neither were you.
This is why I am confused.

My friends had seen what I refused to.
They told me they knew what you do.
That I should not pay when you’re upset.
That you were hurting me emotionally.
That I had to put an end to it.
But, I did not listen to that.
I want to pretend it would be o.k.

My family trusted you.
When you where the problem.
You convinced the teachers and counselors,
That I was the bad guy.
When I walked in the room.
All eyes are on me.
Things used to be different.
Going class to class with a group of friends.
Something I never thought would end.
But you changed that and it hurt.
You know my friends are everything.

I sat there and watched my life change.
It was spinning out of control.
I don’t want to leave.
I really don’t but I can’t let
It stay the same.

It’s not going to be easy,
But something must be done.
You changed me.
I can’t change you.
But, never forget
I love you.
Good bye
My love

Copyright © moon_light ... [ 2005-01-29 12:31:25]
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Re: You changed me. (User Rating: 1 )
by hellsfallenangel on Monday, 31st January 2005 @ 03:51:19 PM AEST
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hey i like it and dont worry thing will work out out soon at least for u well g2g bye

DEMON

Re: You changed me. (User Rating: 1 )
by Baby_Grl on Saturday, 12th March 2005 @ 11:06:10 PM AEST
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It was a wonderful write. It brought tears to my eyes. I know everything will turn out right. And I know wat that write means. Wonderful write Jen.
Baby_Grl

Re: You changed me. (User Rating: 1 )
by linagalMBfan01 on Friday, 22nd April 2005 @ 11:30:04 PM AEST
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jen we're all here for you like we were when it happened. i have to go i'm cying really bad right now because i tried to make u see. i could have tried harder. i should have.

Re: You changed me. (User Rating: 1 )
by pickle on Monday, 7th August 2006 @ 11:52:45 PM AEST
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sylina is right.. i remember when that happened im sry
love you always
pickle

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