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someone on your mind?
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ladyfawn
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Sunday, 30th January 2005 @ 02:31:28 AM in AEST
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Re: someone on your mind?
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by UnlovedChild on
Sunday, 30th January 2005 @ 02:38:36 AM AEST
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This was a great write. I really enjoyed it. :-) Yay!
~Me~ |
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Re: someone on your mind?
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by blowfish_jane on
Sunday, 30th January 2005 @ 03:17:20 AM AEST
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Wow this is really sweet and touching.
Great write, i enjoyed it a lot.
Jane x |
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Re: someone on your mind?
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by autumngreeneyes on
Sunday, 30th January 2005 @ 04:18:12 AM AEST
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| lovely write..I don't find it to be true in my case though..the whole song is sung..but there can be no substittutes..:-( alas.. hope you are well.. did I say lovely write? yes..well, it was! |
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Re: someone on your mind?
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by sweetangeluk on
Sunday, 30th January 2005 @ 09:35:37 AM AEST
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A sweet delicate poem.
Wonderful
Love Sweetangelukxxxx |
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Re: someone on your mind?
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by pixie on
Sunday, 30th January 2005 @ 11:52:13 AM AEST
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that was just lovely, really touching abd sweet
love pix xx |
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Re: someone on your mind?
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by waos on
Monday, 31st January 2005 @ 10:57:12 PM AEST
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The ending was it's strongest point in my opinion - really good analogy.
This was a good solid poem, I definitely can sympathize with
what it says and feels. Nice job.
~waos/kara |
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Re: someone on your mind?
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 07:37:46 PM AEST
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Incredibly sweet write. I really liked the flow.
:-) |
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Re: someone on your mind?
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by Spazzo on
Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 10:47:43 PM AEST
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So beautiful and sweet and awesome and delicate poem.
Scott |
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Re: someone on your mind?
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by Essentially9 on
Monday, 28th February 2005 @ 10:33:50 PM AEST
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| excellent poem nessa. this one deserves more comments than it has. |
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Re: someone on your mind?
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 11th March 2005 @ 04:45:44 AM AEST
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Beautiful and moving. This is simply wonderful my dear, and I don't believe its possible to have wrapped it up anymore smoothly either. An excellent write as always.
Hugs 'n Love
- Becca |
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Re: someone on your mind?
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by hellsfallenangel on
Tuesday, 19th April 2005 @ 06:46:48 AM AEST
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its very good i liked i. ohand tu for the comment on my poem"i am" well g2g bye
DEMON |
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Re: someone on your mind?
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by Aquaelius on
Monday, 2nd May 2005 @ 05:34:59 PM AEST
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Amen sister... you have said it all too well. "As sure as waves bring in the tides."
After a loss, no one can fill the void... can't just brush it off. This is a good one.
Aq. |
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Re: someone on your mind?
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by fielding88 on
Tuesday, 3rd May 2005 @ 02:20:18 PM AEST
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| Excellent! Really well done here, I'm absolutely loving your work! Your conclusion really caught me here too, it was so well crafted, the simile was one that I enjoyed to read, and for some reason it really stands out and speaks to me. I guess this whole poem is something that I can relate to, that must be it. You've written about something I've felt dozens of times over, and it's almost bittersweet. What an excellent piece. |
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Re: someone on your mind?
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by hauntedscorp on
Tuesday, 5th July 2005 @ 01:19:02 PM AEST
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Wow Nessa....I am really glad I read this! Great expression that I can identify with...The title....*smirk* Oh, you have NO idea!! lol That hits home...Good job.
Scorp. |
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Re: someone on your mind?
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by jonteD on
Wednesday, 27th July 2005 @ 09:25:20 AM AEST
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| Great write |
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Re: someone on your mind?
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by Archie on
Saturday, 3rd September 2005 @ 12:28:41 AM AEST
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"where all pros and cons are weighed
simply put, life is all affray,
how did it come to be as such?
for happiness, you love so much,
when you love someone, sooo...
your whole being longs their touch"
I like these lines from this poem the best. This is a great write. |
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Re: someone on your mind?
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by myheartsvoice on
Monday, 7th May 2007 @ 01:43:48 PM AEST
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just so beautiful it reaches out to be heard so as to interact with the heart of the reader. i love your writting.
((((Nessa))))
Ben |
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Re: someone on your mind?
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by colinb on
Monday, 14th July 2014 @ 05:08:06 PM AEST
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| beautiful reaches my heart & soul |
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