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Array ( [sid] => 82092 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Fangs: Metal and Bone [time] => 2005-01-30 02:35:59 [hometext] => Inspired by barbarafloyd's poem My Guardian Angel (Sorry that it is Dark, where your's was Light). [bodytext] => Dead telephone
Silent mile
Dead, black air
Ghost of a smile

Huge crushing ocean
Shoulders too slim
Crushed in a struggle
Face pale and grim

Echoes of moments
Hang on the mind
Substance and soul
Are set to combine

Something he knows
No shadow of doubt
Ritual of Death
And she is devout

Big empty space
Breeds poisoned mind
And crazy paranoid thoughts
Stretch out the time

And then in a daze
The stubborn beast sings
Mind snapped to now
The telephone rings

All is well and good
The angel's voice chimes
But it is undercut by something
Heard too many times

This angel spreads wings
Of hopelessness and despair
Black leathery constructs
That consume the black air [comments] => 1 [counter] => 145 [topic] => 13 [informant] => Xnoybis [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 3 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Fangs: Metal and Bone

Contributed by Xnoybis on Sunday, 30th January 2005 @ 02:35:59 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Dead telephone
Silent mile
Dead, black air
Ghost of a smile

Huge crushing ocean
Shoulders too slim
Crushed in a struggle
Face pale and grim

Echoes of moments
Hang on the mind
Substance and soul
Are set to combine

Something he knows
No shadow of doubt
Ritual of Death
And she is devout

Big empty space
Breeds poisoned mind
And crazy paranoid thoughts
Stretch out the time

And then in a daze
The stubborn beast sings
Mind snapped to now
The telephone rings

All is well and good
The angel's voice chimes
But it is undercut by something
Heard too many times

This angel spreads wings
Of hopelessness and despair
Black leathery constructs
That consume the black air

Copyright © Xnoybis ... [ 2005-01-30 02:35:59]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Fangs: Metal and Bone (User Rating: 1 )
by flamingblade on Sunday, 9th September 2007 @ 10:47:52 AM AEST
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wow very good
i like the imagery
very good write
Flamingblade

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