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Array ( [sid] => 82212 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Be me [time] => 2005-01-30 21:07:11 [hometext] => This is my life, nothing special. Please comment. [bodytext] => All around me such high self esteem
It's all too much cover your ears i'm going to scream
Downing me and you haven't even got a clue
Please just one day, one walk in my shoes

Take a breath and ease your mind
Relax your body and unwind
Slowly close your eyes and count to three
Lay there and pretend you were me
Take a walk to the back of my mind and stay there
What your about to see is nothing pleasant so beware

Take my thoughts and stick them in your head
Take them from me and make them yours instead
Don't be scared go on face my fears
And while your at it feel my pain and taste my tears
Then take a blade and slice your wrist
So tell me are you liking this?

Have everyone tell you your insane
Then punch a wall to ease the pain
Don't forget to take the pills
So tell me how many moodswings does it kill?

Go talk to a million diffrent shrinks
Be sure to tell me what each one thinks

Talk to your mom who doesn't have a clue
And your father who does nothing but yell at you
Call each of your four sisters and tell them how your day was
Then listen to them yell at you just because
Now watch some tv , get on the computer, and the days ulmost done
Isn't my life just so much fun?

Now lay down and fall asleep
Make sure you fall 6 foot deep
If death is what you see
Congradulations your me








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Be me

Contributed by SimplyMe on Sunday, 30th January 2005 @ 09:07:11 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



All around me such high self esteem
It's all too much cover your ears i'm going to scream
Downing me and you haven't even got a clue
Please just one day, one walk in my shoes

Take a breath and ease your mind
Relax your body and unwind
Slowly close your eyes and count to three
Lay there and pretend you were me
Take a walk to the back of my mind and stay there
What your about to see is nothing pleasant so beware

Take my thoughts and stick them in your head
Take them from me and make them yours instead
Don't be scared go on face my fears
And while your at it feel my pain and taste my tears
Then take a blade and slice your wrist
So tell me are you liking this?

Have everyone tell you your insane
Then punch a wall to ease the pain
Don't forget to take the pills
So tell me how many moodswings does it kill?

Go talk to a million diffrent shrinks
Be sure to tell me what each one thinks

Talk to your mom who doesn't have a clue
And your father who does nothing but yell at you
Call each of your four sisters and tell them how your day was
Then listen to them yell at you just because
Now watch some tv , get on the computer, and the days ulmost done
Isn't my life just so much fun?

Now lay down and fall asleep
Make sure you fall 6 foot deep
If death is what you see
Congradulations your me












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Re: Be me (User Rating: 1 )
by O7NeVeS on Monday, 31st January 2005 @ 12:08:47 AM AEST
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That's some pretty deep stuff. Nice flow...TD


Re: Be me (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Monday, 31st January 2005 @ 01:10:20 AM AEST
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So sad but life gets this way at times. U gotta hold on no matter what cause we are all luved the same in God's eyes.
we all wonna die sometimes but life is to be lived and not pretend.
sure there are many out there that do bad things but it the own inner heart that really matters.
huggs,
emy


Re: Be me (User Rating: 1 )
by Candy_Dirtbag on Monday, 31st January 2005 @ 08:11:33 PM AEST
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Hey, cupcake. I wish I could say I know exactly how you feel, but I can't. AcuZ no one really knows *exactly* what another is feeling. All I can say, is I understand and feel some of your pain. Your poems are deep, and make me love you even more, acuZ I can relate to what you're going through. *Hugs, and much love.*

Jessica.


Re: Be me (User Rating: 1 )
by freckle on Monday, 31st January 2005 @ 09:46:34 PM AEST
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Good poem. I have had a day today where I can relate to alot of it. Sometimes life sucks, just plain and simple....then again...sometimes it is incredible! Wish you a great tomorrow!


Re: Be me (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 12:07:24 PM AEST
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yes very deep and expressed so well,
pix xx


Re: Be me (User Rating: 1 )
by catz77 on Wednesday, 2nd March 2005 @ 03:31:43 AM AEST
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wow really deep
how old are you cuz it seems like you have a lot of experience
or maybe its just talent

catz


Re: Be me (User Rating: 1 )
by the_Ghost_Moth on Tuesday, 15th March 2005 @ 07:11:24 PM AEST
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Good writing here,
I'm sure alot of people can relate to it.
What a great ending too.
These would make great lyrics.
--Ghosty




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