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Array ( [sid] => 82260 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Unopened Rose [time] => 2005-01-31 08:51:59 [hometext] => This poem explains What true beauty is. [bodytext] => The unopened flower.

Like an Unopened flower, the loveliness is within.
We know that beauty is on the out but the real treasure is inside.
Skin is stranded to bone.
Some made to appel some made to protect.
Yours is both.
Like an unopened flower the beauty is there but under the skin is where the sweet soul is protected.
The goodness is kept within, the skin and bone.
A soul is there forever.
No matter the shape of the outside.
A flower will grow old wither and die but the memories of what is inside that unopened flower is what will last.
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The Unopened Rose

Contributed by _volcom on Monday, 31st January 2005 @ 08:51:59 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

The unopened flower.

Like an Unopened flower, the loveliness is within.
We know that beauty is on the out but the real treasure is inside.
Skin is stranded to bone.
Some made to appel some made to protect.
Yours is both.
Like an unopened flower the beauty is there but under the skin is where the sweet soul is protected.
The goodness is kept within, the skin and bone.
A soul is there forever.
No matter the shape of the outside.
A flower will grow old wither and die but the memories of what is inside that unopened flower is what will last.

Copyright © _volcom ... [ 2005-01-31 08:51:59]
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Re: The Unopened Rose (User Rating: 1 )
by blazer on Monday, 31st January 2005 @ 08:56:16 AM AEST
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very nice.

Re: The Unopened Rose (User Rating: 1 )
by autumngreeneyes on Monday, 31st January 2005 @ 11:37:50 AM AEST
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beautiful, beautiful tribute...

Re: The Unopened Rose (User Rating: 1 )
by Phantomdream on Monday, 31st January 2005 @ 01:29:06 PM AEST
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This is very sweet and touching. Keep it up!

Re: The Unopened Rose (User Rating: 1 )
by Gothchyk on Monday, 31st January 2005 @ 08:51:04 PM AEST
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very true, great write

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