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Array ( [sid] => 82267 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Dreamer [time] => 2005-01-31 10:29:31 [hometext] => I wrote this one restless night, with Shakespeare in mind, simply due to his type of english. Reality is something so...indescribable, I wanted to touch upon it. Constructive Critiques wholeheartedly invited. [bodytext] => I lie awake,
On a bed of stone,
Dreaming such simple dreams.
My eyes are cock’d,
I am alone,
Ev’rything what it seems.

Toss and turn,
Consciousness slips,
Dreams so wickedly real.
Eyes to and fro,
Happiness dips,
I don’t know how I feel.

Where am I now?
In a world of stone,
Dreaming such simple dreams.
My eyes are cock’d,
I am alone,
Ev’rything what it seems…
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The Dreamer

Contributed by fielding88 on Monday, 31st January 2005 @ 10:29:31 AM in AEST
Topic: mystical

I lie awake,
On a bed of stone,
Dreaming such simple dreams.
My eyes are cock’d,
I am alone,
Ev’rything what it seems.

Toss and turn,
Consciousness slips,
Dreams so wickedly real.
Eyes to and fro,
Happiness dips,
I don’t know how I feel.

Where am I now?
In a world of stone,
Dreaming such simple dreams.
My eyes are cock’d,
I am alone,
Ev’rything what it seems…

Copyright Â© fielding88 ... [ 2005-01-31 10:29:31]
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Re: The Dreamer (User Rating: 1 )
by SeptChill on Monday, 31st January 2005 @ 02:50:51 PM AEST
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I have a poem title The Dreamer. Yours is better, I really like the use of repetition and imagery

Re: The Dreamer (User Rating: 1 )
by SimplyMe on Monday, 31st January 2005 @ 08:43:24 PM AEST
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I get lost in dreams sometimes... just to wake up to reality.. anyways Another peice i enjoyed i think i'll read it again.

~Alucia~

Re: The Dreamer (User Rating: 1 )
by Cesaria1 on Wednesday, 16th February 2005 @ 09:40:07 PM AEST
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good insight. short but deep. i like.

Re: The Dreamer (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 20th February 2005 @ 09:00:23 PM AEST
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Short but sweet and just as beautiful as the others that I have read of yours so far. Nicely done. :o)

Take care
- Becca

Re: The Dreamer (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Friday, 25th March 2005 @ 10:51:12 PM AEST
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shakespeare, i basically have no liking for his work, lol. but this is better than his in my mind. very well done indeed.

Re: The Dreamer (User Rating: 1 )
by xXcrossedXx on Tuesday, 21st June 2005 @ 05:26:00 PM AEST
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This is absolutely PHENOMINAL!! My favorite and I actually mean this time, I have decided this is it! I love this!! I also enjoyed the ellision (i think its called (ex: ev'rything)) I have thought of how to fit it in to my work I guess I'm just not there yet, this was very well done.

Just phenominal!
--amanda--

Re: The Dreamer (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Wednesday, 2nd November 2005 @ 02:08:03 PM AEST
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I always enjoy a good, veiled write. You did well with this piece Marc. The flow was smooth, your words were left open to interpretation, and it really gets the readers thoughts going. Like usual, I found nothing to critique on your write! Keep it up!

Scorp.

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