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[aid] => Mick
[title] => There's A Pain In My Soul
[time] => 2002-12-08 17:00:00
[hometext] => For Greg. This is probably the most honest poem I've ever written, coz I just wrote down thoughts as they came into my head, and I didn't bother trying to organize it into anything other than free verse.
[bodytext] => This world is f***ed and jaded
It's all been twisted around
'Cause I refuse to be what he wants me to be
And it seems I'm not what you want me to be
'Cause if I was, well, you'd be here
Don't I deserve something from you?
Aren't I worth a little of your time?
I haven't lost it yet, but I'm not well
I need someone to hold me now
Damn, here come the tears again
You must know that you're hurting me
You know what I want and need, it's not a lot
But you won't give it to me
And I don't know why
What happened to us, to the way you were?
It used to be thinking of you made me smile
You made me happy
Lately I'm so lonely, and thinking of you
Makes me cry, goddamn, I miss you
Don't you miss me?
You say you do
But you don't show it one little bit
God, I think I'm about to let it go
Start crying and never be able to stop
Forget the single tears
You'll never see the end of it
I need you now
It seems you don't care
Why do you leave me this way?
God, if you love me more than anyone has,
I've never had an ounce of love
'Cause right now there's a pain in every part of my soul
[comments] => 7
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[informant] => MoonlitAngel
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[ratings] => 1
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There's A Pain In My Soul
Contributed by
MoonlitAngel
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Sunday, 8th December 2002 @ 05:00:00 PM in AEST
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This world is f***ed and jaded
It's all been twisted around
'Cause I refuse to be what he wants me to be
And it seems I'm not what you want me to be
'Cause if I was, well, you'd be here
Don't I deserve something from you?
Aren't I worth a little of your time?
I haven't lost it yet, but I'm not well
I need someone to hold me now
Damn, here come the tears again
You must know that you're hurting me
You know what I want and need, it's not a lot
But you won't give it to me
And I don't know why
What happened to us, to the way you were?
It used to be thinking of you made me smile
You made me happy
Lately I'm so lonely, and thinking of you
Makes me cry, goddamn, I miss you
Don't you miss me?
You say you do
But you don't show it one little bit
God, I think I'm about to let it go
Start crying and never be able to stop
Forget the single tears
You'll never see the end of it
I need you now
It seems you don't care
Why do you leave me this way?
God, if you love me more than anyone has,
I've never had an ounce of love
'Cause right now there's a pain in every part of my soul
Copyright ©
MoonlitAngel
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Re: There's A Pain In My Soul
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by DreamWeaver on
Sunday, 8th December 2002 @ 05:25:34 PM AEST
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I think you were looking inside my head when you wrote this :))) I'm so very sorry that things are this way for you.
It's hard to imagine why people who say all the right things to us (words of love, missing you, etc.) but don't show it - what is their problem???? Perhaps just that they are not able to show their feelings like we can. It is so sad and hurts us very badly, when all they have to do is something very small on their part, but to us it means the world. I know exactly how you feel. Very good write.
Love and hugs
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Re: There's A Pain In My Soul
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Sunday, 8th December 2002 @ 05:34:01 PM AEST
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Hi Moonlit,
In my humble opinion, anyone who spawns this much hurt and anger in the person they're supposed to love isn't much worth it.... Very good write! |
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Re: There's A Pain In My Soul
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by Sexygirl on
Sunday, 8th December 2002 @ 07:05:54 PM AEST
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| So much emotions here. You can see the pain written here as well as feeling it too...well done |
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Re: There's A Pain In My Soul
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by Emmie74 on
Sunday, 8th December 2002 @ 07:49:49 PM AEST
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Hey, Dee, just like I said before on your last poem, he's not worth it. I know you still love him, and you always will in a way, but you have to let him go. He doesn't deserve you. Maybe he never has. I hate to see you in pain, as I see you now, and I know it's his fault, and I hate him for hurting you. Sorry to put it bluntly, and I know you'll agree, but he doesn't care anymore. If he did, then he'd try. He'd try to see you, he'd try to contact you. Just a little call means soo much to us girls, just as DreamWeaver said, and yet guys have like, no capacity in their little heads to recognize what we need. What we want. Like I said before, Dee, he is just not worth it. I hope you realize that.
I'll be here for you, as always, if you need me.
Love always and forever,
Em |
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Re: There's A Pain In My Soul
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by yellow_sundragon on
Thursday, 12th December 2002 @ 11:40:01 AM AEST
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Dee,
Greg, well, he's just an jerk off. But he's hurt you, and that pisses me off. I wish I was there, in BC, so I could kill him. I wish I could give you a hug and tell you it will all be ok. In a couple of monthes he'll realize what he did was wrong and come crying back, I know, because that's what he did with me.
The poem is a beautiful write though, the way your thoughts came out is beautiful.
Why is it that when one of us has love problems, so does the other one?
Jaime |
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Re: There's A Pain In My Soul
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by Pigglet on
Thursday, 12th December 2002 @ 10:06:44 PM AEST
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| Dee i think that is the most tuching poam iv ever read of yours. keep up the good work and ignore greg he did the same thing to me and everyone of his girl friends. |
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Re: There's A Pain In My Soul
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by Chef-Boy-R-C on
Sunday, 16th March 2003 @ 08:47:08 PM AEST
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| Great write. Take care and be strong |
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