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The wings did spring and the air did lift
Then you flew into Sister Dark
I thought I saw you light your way

Sister Dark became Sister Grey
You moved to heights so great and stark
Then a thing occurred to me
You had to leave but weren't so free

Your body dropped when I thought it rose
I saw the tears fall from your eyes
You didn't fly; I watched you die
Fall and change into a restless ghost
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The Flight Of The Angel

Contributed by TheForgottenMelody on Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 10:35:26 PM in AEST
Topic: mystical

I saw you bound right off a cliff
The wings did spring and the air did lift
Then you flew into Sister Dark
I thought I saw you light your way

Sister Dark became Sister Grey
You moved to heights so great and stark
Then a thing occurred to me
You had to leave but weren't so free

Your body dropped when I thought it rose
I saw the tears fall from your eyes
You didn't fly; I watched you die
Fall and change into a restless ghost

Copyright © TheForgottenMelody ... [ 2005-02-01 22:35:26]
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Re: The Flight Of The Angel (User Rating: 1 )
by Silent-No-More on Thursday, 3rd February 2005 @ 08:35:03 PM AEST
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There is something about your writing that reminds me of my own poetry. I'm guessing there is a lot behind this piece. This almost feels like... processing... learning to accept it through writing it out and letting yourself feel it. (Ok - maybe that is just what happens when I write, lol --- but I swear I get that same feeling here) This is... as I read it... compassion AND pain drawn together. It's very beautiful.

Well done! I honestly don't understand why there aren't more comments here...

~SNM~

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